In the age of Mecha for everyone, people could travel to the Endless Abyss to gather materials, enhance and forge their own Mechas, and thus wield the power to destroy heavens and earth. Jiang Chen had transmigrated and awakened the talent [Undying Barehand]. Once his Mecha shattered, he could permanently absorb its power and attain a multiple enhancement. ... At the bottom of the abyss, the ancient demon god exerted great effort and finally broke the titan Mecha, but from the shards extended a hand that held down its head. "Congratulations, you've unlocked my restraints."
Slow downonmaking your story development. Also if you’re unsure of writing, you can use grammarly or google drive to help you write. Author needs to decide whether or not his dialogue will contain dialogue quotes or use the actor script dialogue. Even then, author needs to learn how to use dialogue quotes. For the background, as readers we don't need to know everything of the character’s tragic happenings. Limit the background to 1-2 sentences. Don't overly explain why this character does certain actions.