starkid fanfic
First time writing anything, I hope you all would enjoy this. *** I don't know how it happened or why, but this is my new reality—a world of magic and fiction. Now living in the world of *Versatile Mage*, where powerful emperors and dark organizations like the Black Vatican cause trouble, Damon must find a way to survive in this strange new place. As the overpowered character he created himself, he has to navigate this dangerous world and use his powers to face the challenges ahead. *** Pure Versatile Mage Fanfic, I am really reading the work as I write this to be more accurate with the story so yeah there can be a some mistakes especially given how large this novel is, so yeah please do inform me if I make any mistakes. *Harem: not Mu Ningxue Or Ye Yixin *Anti hero *Overpowered *System
The problem I have with this novel is that everything is too hunky-dory for the MC. He's handsome, talented, rich AF and has a rich untalented starkid girlfriend. There's hardly any room for growth, it's a wish-fulfilment story. Everyone loves an underdog story. Perhaps, if he started out as a failure or as the struggling son of a celebrated cricketer, the readers would root for him more. There's no suspense or plot that leaves you nail biting, every chapter you know the MC's going to win like a Boss. Not telling you how you should write, I don't have that authority. There are hardly any novels on this platform on cricket, and I was excited when I found this.