naruto ashura and indra fanfiction

It's a great Naruto fanfiction!! I like it that this story happen at Indra and Ashura era.. I think this is the first time I see Naruto fanfiction in this era (usually they at Naruto or Kakashi, or even Minato).. I don't mind that this story is like chinese cultuvation world, but I like that you explain his power in detail.. It a shame that you make MC/Shun too op (he's even much much stronger that Indra and Ashura, only Hagoromo and maybe Hamura that stronger or equal with him), that make it boring to see he doesn't have a good fight.. It's not good if you have too strong you know (like Saitama).. I like Izanagi and Izanami.. They so kawaii 😍😍 Can't wait to see next chapter.. Keep up the good work author sama 😁😁👍👍👍

for those who want to read the raw, i advise against it. during the final war , he doesn't even have a rinengan despite having a terrifying cheat. his cheat allows him to get ashura and indra chakra when near naruto and yet his focused on playing hokage . if you want to play hokage just master flying thundergod so to collect ashura and indra chakra. such good story but yet disappointing . at the end of war he places his hope on sage of six path and naruto , sasuke

very interesting to read, no instant OP-ness, slow but sure, and agreed that it's very convenient for Sasuke & Naruto to instantly power up just because they are the reincarnation of Indra & Ashura, really, cheat-like existences

this fanfics is really good and i was just wondering if you were gonna give him the Rinnegan bcs its said that when someone has the blood of both indra and ashura they get the rinnegan and uzumakies are descendants of ashura and uchiha are a decendent of indra so the mc should get rinnegan

Você devia fazer Naruto e Sasuke feminino pois Indra e ashura era homens então faz os dois seria legal ter uma filha do que um filho e ser o MC vai pegar Hinata poder pegar Naruto e Sasuke também