war on ruins fanfic

So much drama for a fic revolving around super powered ninjas going to war like you’d think author was writng a fanfic on a sitcom with the way he forces plot development ruins original characters and creates plot holes the size of Authors weird fetish to make his mc the most hideous creature alive

It's a good fanfic, although the Gotham War arc kind of ruins it. It was too drawn out and, as another commenter already said, it made everyone except the MC look incompetent, which is why Thea had to stick her nose in literally everything. I was also disappointed that, like the other 3 or 4 translations of this fanfic, this one was also abandoned. After checking the raw version, I found out that although the original is already complete and has 1082 chapters, after chapter 140 the fanfic became paid content, which is most likely the reason why the translation was abandoned.

A great fanfic, I really enjoyed reading this fic, but the writing quality of the fanfic ruins it for me tbh, fix that and this will be a solid 4-4.5 star

Stolen from https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/165307/the-ruins-beneath-the-lightning-post-war-harry Please go support the original author, they even have many more chapters for free.