lines and page breaks novel

I wanted to read this but god damnit the authors uses emojis every 2 lines. T___T OwO **** like this. Completely breaks the flow. Imagine reading a novel but the author is too dumb to convey the character's feelings with words he writes so he switches to emojis.

Please get rid of the ** before every dialog and get rid of those chat gpt prompts after every 4 lines it breaks Emirsion the story is good but these things are making it so hard to read

story has potential, I'm still quite early. but the way it's written makes the ai narrator reading absolutely abysmal. why do you have a line break between lines? just type it normally and let whatever notepad you're using space it itself. the same thing happens for chapters so when you end a chapter, it waits 40 seconds before starting the next chapter because you've put so many page breaks in between

What Wake Up does so effectively is weaponize format. The story breaks down as the character does. Names flicker into symbols. Repeated lines echo like a broken record. Whole paragraphs dissolve into unreadable noise. Well done.

a very refreshing story far different from the usual ones you see here. both leads are very rational and so many lines are relatable and applicable in real life. a page-turner