mangekyo sharingan naruto crossover fanfic

I feel sick... He has the Mangekyo Sharingan and chakra only at the level of an elite genin... This is the dumbest nerf of the Mangekyo Sharingan I have ever seen. The author clearly knows nothing about the Mangekyo Sharingan (although, most likely, he's just some weirdo obsessed with nerfing... and it's an unrealistic nerf at that...). It's physically impossible to awaken the Mangekyo Sharingan and still have a low chakra reserve (it should increase significantly). After awakening it, there should be massive qualitative and quantitative changes in his chakra (even a single Sharingan provides huge improvements... and here we're talking about the Mangekyo Sharingan). The chakra of a regular jonin would already be insufficient for the Mangekyo Sharingan... For a three-tomoe Sharingan, the chakra level of a regular jonin would barely be acceptable, but this is the Mangekyo Sharingan... And yet, he managed to use it with genin-level chakra (I feel like spitting in the author’s face). and most importantly, the author is completely unfamiliar with the history of the Naruto world... he writes fanfiction about the Uchihas, but he doesn’t even know ordinary things (for example, when they were resettled...).

so its pretty good ngl I like how you implemented naruto's parents and jutsu in it but I have 2 questions. 1. will he get the sharingan and if so the mangekyo sharingan too. 2. will he get kakashis lightning blade and other jutsu.

Meh, this isn't bad. However, both Naruto and Sasuke have been working hard for the past four years had less/equal amount of development as lee had in 1 year and several months. Naruto almost passed out from Zabuza's killing intent but was okay with Kuramas, who last time I checked is the strongest of the nine tail beasts. The training in the academy was fine, but the results were underwhelming. They should at least be able to defeat Kakashi without the Sharingan individually. Yes, Kakashi is a veteran, but he is a stagnated veteran. He barely improved from the 14 years old version of himself and highly depends on his Sharingan. Kakashi can't use the Chidori without it. Overall, the power scaling is BS. Here is how it should have been. Graduation: Naruto = Jonin Sasuke (Without Sharingan) = Low Jonin Sasuke (Sharingan) = Jonin Sasuke (Lightning Sharingan) = Elite Jounin Sakura = Low Genin Kakashi = Jonin Kakashi (With Sharingan) = Elite Jonin Post Wave Arc : Naruto = Elite Jonin Sasuke (Without Sharingan) = Jonin Sasuke (With Sharingan) = Elite Jonin Sasuke (Lightning Sharingan) = Low S-class Sakura = Low Chunin Time Skip 3-years: Naruto = S-class Naruto ( Chakra Mode) = Low SS-class Naruto (Kurama Mode) = High SS-class Sasuke = Low S-class Sasuke (Sharingan) = S-class Sasuke (Lightning Sharingan) = High S-class Sasuke (Mangekyo Sharingan) = High S-class Sasuke (Lightning Mangekyo Sharingan) = Low SS-class Sasuke (Perfect Susanoo) = SS class Sakura = Elite Jonin Kakashi = Elite Jonin Kakashi (With Sharingan) = Low S-class

Keep on continuing the fanfic it is good on with a Naruto and pokemon crossover