naruto joins anbu fanfic

5 stars untill chapter 30. MC know for a fact that joining anbu will be bad for him an still joins anyway. The story from then on becomes more stale an predictable, like every other naruto fanfic out there. Makes me believe author doesn't know what to write so he wrote that. Besides that this novel has great grammar an long chapters, fast updates an a interesting plot intill chapter 30. While the insertion of MC may need more work it's doable. The MC hasn't much of a persona yet but feels OK for now. A ok read to pass the time.

Overall, it’s not bad—it’s a decent fanfic—but I’d advise the author to check out other novels and fanfics to see how the ANBU actually operates. Because from what I’ve seen, this seems like a bit of a slapdash job. The ANBU simply can’t operate like that, especially when it comes to monitoring the Jinchūriki . It can’t be just one ANBU member watching over him; there should be at least three from ANBU or the Root. At least a few members, because Danzo wouldn’t leave the Jinchūriki unsupervised. They’re unlikely to work alone; it’s impossible. What if some ninjas from the Land of Lightning show up again and try to capture the Jinchūriki—how is a single ANBU agent supposed to handle that? That’s why I’d advise the author to read another fanfic: “Naruto: I Got ‘Return by Death’ Kind Of Cheat!” Even though it’s a Chinese knockoff, it does a pretty good job—maybe even a great job—of describing the realities of ANBU work.

Tbh this is the only fanfic of naruto with this detailed political game and this shows that 4 hokage never stood a chance againt shrewd duo of hiruzen and danzo, also i think theres so much insight into anbu and protocols when you are a shinobi, overall if the story keeps going the way it is now then i think it might be one of the best

I don’t like the fact that the mc joined anbu didn’t itachi not want any uchai to join the anbu and I don’t like the fact that every new fanfic the mc has to have white hair