3rd grade level story

I'm going to lead with the hard truth here. If you are impatient and barely have 2 brain cells to rub together, this book isn't for you. This isn't some 3rd grade effort cultivation novel and you need more than a 3rd grade reading level to follow along and understand what's happening. There are several main/side characters that do stuff. This isn't an MC only book. There is actual world building, actual characters with actual development. That means that the story pacing is slow. This is easily one of the best Novels on this app. It's an actual story, not some lonely teenager's wish fulfillment put to paper.

it's quite an interesting read. progress isn't too slow nor too fast, plot and character development progresses as the story unfolds too. but the world building still needs some work. some things are just glossed over, not explained at all. 30 chapters in and the cultivation level system of the world is not known. the grades of things ( pills, talismans, etc) are just mentioned without any explanation on whether they pertain to qi refining stage or foundation establishment stage. the author just casually mentions for example; a 3rd grade pill and expects the readers to just fill in the blanks. ( like wtf is a 3rd grade pill? is it a golden core lvl pill?) does 1st grade refer to qi refining and 2nd grade foundation establishment? theres no clue. maybe you plan to do it slowly later but dude the first 30 chapters is enough to reveal all this. this leaves more to be desired. I'm not asking for an info dump but still at least define your world clearly.

the thing that i just want to say is that it's a 3rd grade a bullcrap the thing that you want to read because of the bullcrap being shown in the font of your eyes

It was first told that strongest person has only A grade talent then as the story progress people with S Grade talent are everywhere. If the MC has SSS grade talent than he shouldn't be so low leveled he should improve fast and as the story progress the enemies with even B grade talent are taken seriously by our MC. Not only that but the stats and experience points are not shown correctly. if a level 7 person has one of its stats as 100 as every level up gives 8 free stats than the MC which can absorb the skills and stats should have stats in 1000s. I think the author is not good with maths and the chapters are so repetitive 😐

This is unreadable... it is like reading a MTL that was thrown into a blender that was set on fire. If you get a editor that can read dead languages maybe they can somehow piece together a understandable version of your story, until then I am gonna have to say this is a HARD pass for me and anyone else that has a basic 3rd grade reading level. I couldn't even get halfway into the first chapter. I was so lost I thought the author was trolling me.