Sophia: I didn't ask for my mother to get married, I didn't ask for five protective step brothers, and I definitely didn't ask for him to become my daddy. Victor: I'm an alpha, a werwolf, I'm a possessive beast. She's my new step sister, my new baby, she's mine. The family: We only find our mate once in our life, when our brother, future alpha, proud daddy dom found his mate,but only for her to be our new step sister we knew we were in for a ride, welcome to the family little sis. This is a DDLG story, you've been warned.
I understand that this does not fit into the rigid walls of a story, but I was disappointed to see that this was essentially a story that could be fit into two lines. People read realistic fiction to put themselves in other people's shoes and to see the world from a perspective that they did not know existed. And it is a sight for sore eyes to see an anecdote with insane amounts of potential be skimmed to an anti-climactic high. If I wanted to read a mundane anecdote, I would read the newspaper. The lack of emotion and feelings and thoughts and ideologies, is what makes this anecdote dry. If you are going to have a synopsis that is essentially clickbait, then please ensure that your work also lives up to its potential. Please take my words in a positive spirit. Work on -feelings -emotions -thought process and this will help you elicit a better reaction.