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The writing is solid. Many aspects of it are like a professional novel, though to me it goes a bit over-the-top for my tastes. I don't hold that against the writer though, it's more of a stylistic preference. The updates seem steady and the story development seems sound. The character design is good and she does a good job of immersing characters into the setting of the story. I would say the story could use a little more description of what the environment looks like, what the weather is like, the terrain, or what a town looks like. The description of the characters is solid and better than most wenbovel stories. The general narration is excellent. I can't think of issues with the dialogue.

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The world building is good. I think it'd be a nice bonus if I heard description of the weather conditions, look of the environment, and how people are dressed. From what I can tell, the writing does everything I'd expect from it. The updates are steady. The story seems to develop but I only read the first 5 chapters. The characters seem good overall from what I read (just make sure you flesh them out and give the most important ones some background information to make their stories impactful).

I was surprised with the sudden twists but all those twists make me dig more within the story. I was am so eager to read for what is going to happen next and so on. The words is very good and unique. I even notice the place, the narration of the weather or environment the cold the, steam on the bath I like the author deliver it all for the characters of the story.

The characters are well potrayed and the tine in which she describes the environment is top notch... ash_knight truly smazes me with her writing skills