ace and sabo fanfic

I completely lost the will to read it as soon as I read in the synopsis that the MC's goal is to make friends with the 3 idiots Luffy, Ace and Sabo....... Another fanfic where the MC will become Luffy's nanny or subordinate.

the beginning of the story is very good but as for the relationship between luffy, Sabo and his cousin Ace, will he save Sabo from dying. I think we should let him die but he regains his memory thanks to a genjutsu or other.

U should add sabo to the army cause then it give u a good reason to go to the Marine fort war when the Marine kill ace. For now I think u should develop your army ** if sabo joins he should get the sunwokun fruit

As idades de luffy sabo e ace estao erradas, o luffy e 10 anos mais novo que a Robin se ela ja tem 25 anos o luffy ia ter 15 o ace 18 eo sabo 20 porque ele eo mais velho. Quando a robin tinha 28 anos o luffy 18, se voce coniar assim quando o luffy for para o mar com 18 anos a robin vai ter 33 ou 34

so far this great fic, with fresh idea and not too overpowered mc of course he is overpowered for his island for now but as time goes i think ace and sabo will catch up to him somewhat . it just started but writing is good story is great and has great potential. recommended 100 % for one piece fanfic lovets