ace and luffy and sabo

As idades de luffy sabo e ace estao erradas, o luffy e 10 anos mais novo que a Robin se ela ja tem 25 anos o luffy ia ter 15 o ace 18 eo sabo 20 porque ele eo mais velho. Quando a robin tinha 28 anos o luffy 18, se voce coniar assim quando o luffy for para o mar com 18 anos a robin vai ter 33 ou 34

I completely lost the will to read it as soon as I read in the synopsis that the MC's goal is to make friends with the 3 idiots Luffy, Ace and Sabo....... Another fanfic where the MC will become Luffy's nanny or subordinate.

the beginning of the story is very good but as for the relationship between luffy, Sabo and his cousin Ace, will he save Sabo from dying. I think we should let him die but he regains his memory thanks to a genjutsu or other.

the story idea is interesting, but it shouldn't be concentrating so much on Luffy, there are many big people that have important secrets, but I approve Ace living and Sabo memory back [img=recommend]

The plot is good. But last chapter the MC was literally monologued about Ace's death which seemed unnecessary. Also in the beginning it seemed that MC didn't have much attachment to ONE PIECE character but now he cries after seeing Luffy,Ace and Sabo.