I picked up a small world at the beginning
The clouds in the sky moved, and the world expanded!
The Human Race's Chosen One: " The heavens are hateful. When can our people escape this bitter prison?!"
I've been cultivating mo skills, so if I can kill my way out of this place one day, I'll bathe the heavens in blood."
The elves: " The snow is piled up in the clouds, and the sky is full of grace. If you advance, if you retreat, if you go, if you live, just to seek a life of freedom!"
Fizz, I'm blowing bubbles…
All the living beings in the myriad worlds are in the palm of my hand.
Many times, you are so proud that you think you have control over fate.
In fact, you have always been controlled by fate.
P.S. Creation Style, Farming Style.
Ancient God No. 1
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Story is ok. It could be better if the author let the MC be his own person with his own thoughts and feelings and goals. Instead, hes just a baby sitter for hiccup and astrid and it gets annoying. Hes always following and sticking up for hiccup, for no reason other than plot and it comes off as forced. The author states that theyre friends, but their interactions state otherwise. Not to mention the author decides to have the MC lose his leg….for no reason whatsoever. Does the author want the MC to be hiccup or something? Like at that point why even make an OC. The MC shoulda just been hiccup. (Id just like to know the reasoning) he could have lost an eye, an arm, an ear, a hand….ANYTHING. Yet the author wanted to have him lose a leg and not be able to walk…i mean whatever.