"An everyday man gets thrown into the world of twilight thousands of years before the start of the plot. With immortality and incredible abilities. How will this man's presence change the outcome of the original story?" [ this is a slow-burn fanfiction; the MC is just trying to experience life and enjoy it, not to take over the world and rule from the shadows.] I do not own twilight or the characters of the twilight world, all that belongs to me are my own characters.
Story is ok. It could be better if the author let the MC be his own person with his own thoughts and feelings and goals. Instead, hes just a baby sitter for hiccup and astrid and it gets annoying. Hes always following and sticking up for hiccup, for no reason other than plot and it comes off as forced. The author states that theyre friends, but their interactions state otherwise. Not to mention the author decides to have the MC lose his leg….for no reason whatsoever. Does the author want the MC to be hiccup or something? Like at that point why even make an OC. The MC shoulda just been hiccup. (Id just like to know the reasoning) he could have lost an eye, an arm, an ear, a hand….ANYTHING. Yet the author wanted to have him lose a leg and not be able to walk…i mean whatever.