naruto akuma no mi fanfiction

:D :) ;) why? why i am cry? this is magnific obra, first obra within read when the sons of MC has part of the story . there are others? the mc despert the akuma no mi, the sons e daughters of MC despert akuma no mi.

I'll start by talking about what I thought of this fanfic so far. The beginning of the story was good, the protagonist presented himself as an intelligent person and with a strategic mind, but little by little he changed and became more stupid and noisy, like the typical MC shonen. Another thing I didn't like about this fanfic is the fact that the author gave the protagonist an Akuma no Mi of the Mythic Zoan type where in theory he should transform the user into an Asura, but the only thing she does is to grow more arms, none special ability or physical transformation that we all know that an Akuma no Mi of the Zoan Mythic type has, because in all Akuma no Mi of the Zoan type a type of physical transformation in the user, be it a hybrid or total form, in addition, all Akuma no Mi of the Mythic Zoan type have a special ability, for example, the admiral of the Sengoku fleet in his Buddha form has the ability to generate shock waves with his palms and Marco of the Whitebeard pirates has flames that are capable of healing the user, Akuma no Mi appears to be of Paramecia type instead of Zoan type, the author suggested that a big change will occur when awakening happens, but to use Akuma no Mi’s hybrid or full transformation skills isn’t n It is necessary to be in the state of Upon awakening, by the way, this Akuma no Mi chosen for the protagonist is very impractical, because the greater the number of arms the slower the MC is, there is also the fact that the arms that come out from the back have a range smaller than the main arms, since the created limbs do not extend, unless opponents attack from behind for the rest of the things there are few advantages, it would have been better not to have given MC an Akuma no Mi if it were so, nor has the excuse of running out of time, since the protagonist has eaten Akuma no Mi for years, in all these years has he never seen another skill besides growing more hands? I don't think it's possible. Anyway this fanfic is not to my liking, but I will give 4 stars to motivate the author, because it is not easy to write a story. Sorry for any grammatical errors, I am writing this through the Google translator.

É uma boa tradução, eu parei de ler por que não curti ele ser um Dragão Celestial e nem a forma como a Akuma no Mi dele tava copiando habilidades de outras akuma no mim.

Una historia realmente entretenida, la Akuma no mi del sol me encantó, aunque me hubiera gustado ver más referencias al gran Escanor. Totalmente recomendado.

Amazing fanfic, read 99.9% of chapters but I have 1 question. Will you please create a NARUTO fanfiction? Mc is Naruto. Will you please create a NARUTO fanfiction? Mc is Naruto. Will you please create a NARUTO fanfiction? Mc is Naruto. Will you please create a NARUTO fanfiction? Mc is Naruto. Will you please create a NARUTO fanfiction? Mc is Naruto. Will you please create a NARUTO fanfiction? Mc is Naruto.