Rising from insignificance, dominating among myriad heavens. The Ye family, a small clan, started its rise from a small mountain village, from martial arts to cultivation. Ye Fan transmigrated to another world, acquiring a system for the rise of the family. There's no resources for the family to cultivate, I’ll learn alchemy. The family's formation isn't strong enough, so I’ll learn the formation. I'll learn all six arts of cultivation, all for the rise of the family. As for my own cultivation? Anything will do, as the family rises, I'll become stronger. My strength is the sum of the family. In the eyes of my sons, Ye Fan, this old man, can do everything. Through the eyes of my wife, Ye Fan is the perfect god of masculinity. In the eyes of the younger generations in the family, Grandpa Ye Fan is an invincible existence.
This is actually really good for your first novel and compared to your fan fiction. The world background could use some work cause you only have one kingdom the Phoenix kingdom but I like how all other nations' leaders are related. the writing quality can be improved there are some mistakes or missing words