aayla secura jedi out of time fanfic

GoldDragonMachina A Star Wars Fanfic where it is two years before the Naboo blockade. Our MC Jack Raquette after meeting a God gets put into the Star Wars Galaxy after he dies from being struck by lightning in his previous world. Can he build up his Sovereign in this Galaxy while bringing peace and prosperity to the Galaxy, or will he succumb to the pressure . Home Base Planet: Nar Shadaa Harem Padme Amidala Duchess Satine Kryze Tiplee Tiplar Nala Se Miraj Scintel Aura Sing Queen Julia Luminara Unduli Aayla Secura Ahsoka Barriss Offee

Really good fanfic 👑👑 not many Jedi centric ones 👍

Any fanfic where the MC helps jabba out as a Jedi is an automatic 1 star. One of the worst beings in the galaxy and they help him lol was a trash arc in clone wars and is an even worse arc in fanfics since the author can literally change it lol not wasting my time with this cringe edgelord mc that helps out slavers.

well, im writing this review after reading until chapter 73 "knighthood III" and droping here; First; this fanfic was good and interesting the first 50 chapters, it had his problems with cuting out of the story things when it was becoming interesting like "SPOILER" when he contact with Narro Sienar and tells him about the bomb, the author develop 2 chapters about that incident and before resolving it he just cut to black and tells us the conclution, this happens a couple times in others chapters. Second; im not fan of harems because they almost always are bad developed, i gave this fanfic a chance even if it had this tag because the reviews give it a lot of praises so i thought it most be very good and the harem most been very good developed, well, his relationship with Barris was good developed, but my disapointment was incredible when girls like Aayla and Master Shaak started to come up out of nowhere like they are very close to him for years or something, and less not forget that Aaila with just one interaction with anakin developed a bond force out of nowhere, so yeah, harem is semi trash, i say sami beacuse i saw worse but isn't good enough to be even reciclable trash. And Third; basically the drop that spilled the glass, in knighthood chapters the trials are transmitted for gains or something, i doubt that is the Jedi's ways, they have a presentator Jedi wich is very animated wich is very weird for a jedi, the author cut in the middle of his fight test with Yoda and tells us the results, and then they do and transmit the "flesh trial" a trial made in the old Jedi Order and i doubt is still aplied in the republic jedi order, but they still aply it for not specific reason and yes, they still transmit it to all universe and they even have a gallery with spectators that aren't all jedi and/or not even from the senate, just random big fish in the trade industry. And hte worst part here is the MC says first, "i would have to take of my nanosuit for thist test" (i forgot to mention that the emperor of the space marines was a sith lord just to put warhammer 40000 things here) and then says "im not going to take it of because i don't want to feel pain" wich is fair enought but then you shouldn't have said before that you would tak off then, and the more cringe and my dropping point was when he pretended to feel pain he started to say PG curses like "merlin's beard" or the more stupid thing he said at the end "yer' a wizard 'arry". so yeah, this "was" a good fanfic until the author started to write like if he started to suffer from braind damage or something. so, if you as a reader don't mind bad written harem/romance (wich there's any close to romance in this fanfic), incomplete parts on an story or... whatever it was what i read in chapter 73 then yeah, go read this, im just writting this review because i felt i lost my time reading this fanfic, how i hate to not have others fanfic to read wich was why i gave this thing a chance.