steve x bucky fanfiction

I liked the premise, the beginning, and parts of the story overall. The problem is that we have Maggie Stark as the protagonist, who has been shown to be someone who could be Tony Stark(her brother)‘s equal or near equal. THEN she also has the super soldier serumn like Steve or Bucky, with all the training HYDRA could provide, such as the Red Room like Natasha. Why is that bad? It isn’t. Until her presence in the MCU does basically nothing to change how the story goes. Major events stay basically the same, except some have an extra person in it- such as when going into the past to get the infinity stones, she joins Steve, stands there while he gets the scepter, rushes off to help with the cube, gets slapped by past-Hulk, rushes back to see Steve basically defeat past-Steve, knocks out past-Steve, and then has to go with Steve and Tony to the past. WHERE she follows Tony to get the cube, and nothing changes… except she’s in the scene. Her role in this story amounts to basic emotional support to the Avengers and Bucky. Of course that’s downplaying it a bit to make summarization easier, but still… she’s by no means fulfilling the role cut out for her. She doesn’t even do the snap instead of Tony, so all I can think of her being there is to give Bucky a happy ending, and help Pepper raise Morgan. Of course, a lot of that is just expectations vs reality. It’s just disappointing there. Overall a good novel though.

So he rusjed all the first few chaps and then decided tojust copy another novel off of here to set up his relationships with bucky and steve minus the actual good interesting and character building moments of the novel. Overall just lazy copying while adding his own twists in to make it his own character

Erskine still dies and Bucky still fell, guessing Steve would probably be frozen again... Someone comment on this once Author actually changes the plot. So I could either delete this or just change the rating. Another thing that is annoying for me is how MC keeps on fighting with just his fists... Use a gun for fudge sake. Even Steve uses a shield for range combat.

It's a Reincarnator in a world of Marvel Universe. Knows Chi - became student of Ancient One Combat/Ninja Arts - Enemy of the Hands MC fight alongside with Steve Rogers (Captain America), Bucky (Winter Soldier) and James Howlett (Wolverine) Became popsicle same with Capt. Deathstroke(MC) Batman(Shadow) Green Arrow(Hunter) Wonder Woman(Amazon Queen)

The writing quality and stability of updates has always been good since the beginning. Some parts of the development are bad and others are good. The current stark to Bucky thing is a little off and would cause Steve to mess up stark. That part just feels off with the characters. The amount of powers Peter is developing is a little too much on the extreme side. It’s nice to see interactions between x men and avengers… more development on that would probably be a good course. There are so many characters that can interact I feel are being under utilized. The world background needs a little more description and feels still to close to other ideas. Overall a recommended read.