naruto dead bone pulse sharingan fanfiction

Interesting premise dead bone pulse is a pretty rare kekkei genkai and has a lot of potential to be explored. And someone finally doing this is a plus for me so I’mma try it out

A really great fanfiction. Good pace and strength gaining system with believable logic with respect yo the naruto world. Even though I didn't like some things that MC ignore one of the important person whom the author devloped it was understandable but there was no charector development in MC after the incident ~ ~ ~ ~ Spoiler ahead ~ ~ ~ ~ I meant the dead of sharingan girl and the massacre. Should have saved her

So far so good. Mc is talented and is a member of kaguya clan. Hasn’t awakened the dead bone pulse kekkai genkai yet, but he’s still young. He’s also considered a prodigy alongside kimimaro. Also since he’s a member of the kaguya clan he also has a lot of potential since they are also descended from Kaguya

If it was just wolverine powers with the kaguya bone pulse then sure this might be decent but then you have him super speed, storms powers, and magnetos powers…. What a garbage idea

Meh, this isn't bad. However, both Naruto and Sasuke have been working hard for the past four years had less/equal amount of development as lee had in 1 year and several months. Naruto almost passed out from Zabuza's killing intent but was okay with Kuramas, who last time I checked is the strongest of the nine tail beasts. The training in the academy was fine, but the results were underwhelming. They should at least be able to defeat Kakashi without the Sharingan individually. Yes, Kakashi is a veteran, but he is a stagnated veteran. He barely improved from the 14 years old version of himself and highly depends on his Sharingan. Kakashi can't use the Chidori without it. Overall, the power scaling is BS. Here is how it should have been. Graduation: Naruto = Jonin Sasuke (Without Sharingan) = Low Jonin Sasuke (Sharingan) = Jonin Sasuke (Lightning Sharingan) = Elite Jounin Sakura = Low Genin Kakashi = Jonin Kakashi (With Sharingan) = Elite Jonin Post Wave Arc : Naruto = Elite Jonin Sasuke (Without Sharingan) = Jonin Sasuke (With Sharingan) = Elite Jonin Sasuke (Lightning Sharingan) = Low S-class Sakura = Low Chunin Time Skip 3-years: Naruto = S-class Naruto ( Chakra Mode) = Low SS-class Naruto (Kurama Mode) = High SS-class Sasuke = Low S-class Sasuke (Sharingan) = S-class Sasuke (Lightning Sharingan) = High S-class Sasuke (Mangekyo Sharingan) = High S-class Sasuke (Lightning Mangekyo Sharingan) = Low SS-class Sasuke (Perfect Susanoo) = SS class Sakura = Elite Jonin Kakashi = Elite Jonin Kakashi (With Sharingan) = Low S-class