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little red house apple story

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The hearse with the weird odor slowed to a stop before the entrance. The sound of pebbles could be heard bouncing on the ceiling. There were footsteps coming from the corridor, and there seemed to be someone sawing next door. The door knob to the room rattled slightly, and the faucet in the bathroom kept dripping even though it had been screwed shut. There was a rubber ball that rolled on its own underneath the bed. Wet footsteps started to surface one after another on the floor. At 3 am, Chen Ge held a cleaver in his hand as he hid beside the room heater. The call he was trying to make was finally answered. "Landlord, is this what you meant by 'the house can be a little crowded at night'‽"

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ghost_kuro
2022-08-23

writing quality 1 star, story development 1 star, character design 1 star, stability of update 4 star, world background 3 star, i dont know why this story seems to make me dull. i cant really feel any excitement or any feeling reading this chapter. i only feel ANNOYED every time the MC lie to other people. so strong and op yet the only word that comes from the MC's mouth is a lie. there is only two words that i can use to describe the MC: COWARD & HYPOCRITE. to justify my reason because MC is a living liar that lies to everyone he meets. MC is scared of everything. MC always stated that he does not like to take the first initiative to cause trouble for someone who did not wrong him. But then because of his fear of danzo he decided to sacrifice the whole uchiha clan. why i rate so low because, in terms of writing quality its too much useless repetitive description. what I'm trying to say is : person B : the apple is a fruit. the apple has a shape. the apple two colors .the apple is either red or green. apple is only one of many fruits but still red apple is more preferable.Red apple are generally more sweet and slightly more heavier in terms of weight. person A : shocked by the realization of red apple is more preferable. persob B : (continues to repeat) after thinking about it green apple and red apple are also in high demand. To tell you the truth the fruit we need is an apple. We need to find out the shape of the apple. we need to investigate the difference between two colour of the apple. We also need to find more red apple because it is more preferable. because red apple is more sweet and heavier than green apple. this this the writing quality of this fanfic. very repetitive. as for character Design is very bland and Boring. Normally when we read about MC getting new powers as a reader we will be excited to see the MC using the powers or train his best in it. BUT in this fanfic i am already numb when i see the mc get a new power . for example. MC got paper jutsu on early chapter then suddenly after a few more chapters he still get the same paper jutsu from reading mind. YET, the MC acted shocked as if he got the jutsu for the first time. many jutsu are being recycle as if the MC did not realize it. there is no growth for MC(immature> mature attitude/mindset), because he always runs away and kept a low profile.very cowardly and boring to read.

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Who are the characters in 'the little red house apple story'?
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2024-12-12 04:06
Since I don't know the specific story, it's hard to say. But it could have a little boy or girl who lives in the little red house and is associated with the apple.
What is 'the little red house apple story' about?
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2024-12-11 10:09
I'm not sure exactly as there could be many different stories with that name. It might be about an apple that has some sort of connection to a little red house, perhaps the apple is found near the house or there is a special event related to the apple and the house.
Tell me the 'little red house apple story'.
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2024-12-09 15:30
The 'little red house apple story' might be a fable where the little red house represents something special, like a place that protects the precious apple. For example, the apple could be a magical or very rare one, and the red house is where it is kept safe from those who would misuse it. However, this is just speculation as I don't know the actual story.
What are the main characters in the 'little red house apple story'?
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2024-12-07 14:16
In the 'little red house apple story', the main characters could be diverse. Firstly, there could be a family who lives in the little red house. They plant and take care of the apple tree. Then, there might be a wandering traveler who passes by the house and is attracted by the apple tree. The apple itself could almost be considered a character too, as it might be the center of the story's events, whether it's being the source of a mystery or a gift that changes the lives of the characters in the story.
What is the 'little red apple story' about?
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2024-10-28 15:39
The 'little red apple story' could be a fable. Maybe it's about a special little red apple that has magical powers. For example, it could be able to talk and goes on adventures with the animals in the forest. It might teach a moral lesson, like the importance of sharing or kindness.
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