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Review Detail of NoblePrime in A Stay-at-home Dad's Restaurant In An Alternate World

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NoblePrime
NoblePrimeLv134yrNoblePrime

It started out with a good few chapters. MC is made to become a chef because of his fake and overly harsh criticism of restaurants in his past life. New body is weakened because of underhanded backstabbing and has a daughter to take care of now. The system was quirky at first because it wanted the MC to become a chef with as little deviation in the MC’s journey until it was pigeon-holed into just being a machine that wants money. The daughter was cute, kind, and a little sassy in the beginning until that became her whole character. She will threaten anything and anyone about burning them alive and will give insulting nicknames to customer because she does not want to learn their names or because it has more than two syllables, she is never reprimanded because of nonsense about being too cute to punish or correct her behavior towards people and animals. A promising novel idea quite frankly ruined because there is no development in the character of short-cut taking MC or bratty daughter that will look for any excuse to burn someone alive.

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A Stay-at-home Dad's Restaurant In An Alternate World

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Anarchy
AnarchyLv5Anarchy

Maybe it's just the way it was translated on qidian. Kitchen novels translation was more detailed in comparison I think. Even though I only compared 1 chapter from each, it was so obvious it was painful. The lack certain details may be what made her come off that way

Anarchy
AnarchyLv5Anarchy

It was chapter 173 if anyone wants to do a quick check themselves

Anarchy:Maybe it's just the way it was translated on qidian. Kitchen novels translation was more detailed in comparison I think. Even though I only compared 1 chapter from each, it was so obvious it was painful. The lack certain details may be what made her come off that way
ExpertConnoisseur
ExpertConnoisseurLv5ExpertConnoisseur

you guys don't even realize that this is a ****ty fantasy version of "stay at home-dad" on babelnovels LMAOOOO. get with the times. webnovel is filled with garbage originals/pornos and there has been no addition in the past year worth reading. ********** went big and got the rights to "the second coming of gluttony" so they became relevant again. in the last few months, babelnovel has gotten the license to all the top notch modern life novels and I've found SO many gems, one of them being "stay at home dad". its high quality machine translation with editing, so the translation quality is not as good as **********. but the novels are FAR more interesting. I fucking hate babelnovel to death for locking all their top novels and requiring bricks/spirit stones, but right now it's 1. babelnovel 2. ********** 3. webnovel

AllornicGod
AllornicGodLv5AllornicGod

What is the second one

ExpertConnoisseur:you guys don't even realize that this is a ****ty fantasy version of "stay at home-dad" on babelnovels LMAOOOO. get with the times. webnovel is filled with garbage originals/pornos and there has been no addition in the past year worth reading. ********** went big and got the rights to "the second coming of gluttony" so they became relevant again. in the last few months, babelnovel has gotten the license to all the top notch modern life novels and I've found SO many gems, one of them being "stay at home dad". its high quality machine translation with editing, so the translation quality is not as good as **********. but the novels are FAR more interesting. I fucking hate babelnovel to death for locking all their top novels and requiring bricks/spirit stones, but right now it's 1. babelnovel 2. ********** 3. webnovel
UnPro
UnProLv3UnPro

W.u.x.i.a.w.o.r.l.d

AllornicGod:What is the second one
Oto
OtoLv14Oto

You’ve done a great job summing up what I wanted to say. The system and the daughter ruined the novel. Even the author’s ignorant nationalism could be overlooked if the story was truly interesting but the tropes were like beating a dead horse. Author completely lost sight of the plot.

Ex_Edge_Lord_
Ex_Edge_Lord_Lv4Ex_Edge_Lord_

why did you write it like that?

UnPro:W.u.x.i.a.w.o.r.l.d
honeyseeto_03
honeyseeto_03Lv3honeyseeto_03

Pretty much summed up what I was thinking when I read this. The starting was really good but then the daughter just became annoying and throughout the plot, the conflicts just felt repetitive. The romance kinda fell short of expectations as well.

othergeorgebush
othergeorgebushLv14othergeorgebush

I agree that the system and daughter's behavior is noteworthy but I don't think they are novel shortcomings. The system's greed made sense to me once I considered it was self aware and biased. The extra income of these side hustles allows the system to be more powerful than the design would normally allow. It found an exploit and spammed it like any sensible gamer would. Putting aside 'cute is justice', my initial reaction was spoiling her could create a monster. After some thought I realized not learning to use her power while closely supervised could lead to tragedy in a number of ways. Raising such a powerful daughter who liked to talk big and fight, but knew how to hold back based on her foes abilities is not a bad outcome.