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Review Detail of HatoYin in Soul of Searing Steel

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HatoYin
HatoYinLv55yrHatoYin

Descriptive novels is a quality novel but this novel while beginning is done really well I gets a bit over board as plot progressed. While the mc seems full with emotions and personality, it is really empty as mc seems to be a programmed robot with each decisions and actions done without any real thought. Also different perspective being jumbled without any structure and flow, felt like reading this and that jumping between back and forth... Is like watwatching a movie made with best visual technology and plot but without colour and sound at the same time with random rewinding and forwarding.

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Soul of Searing Steel

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BloodWood
BloodWoodLv3BloodWood

U mean perspectives??

CasualReader99
CasualReader99Lv5CasualReader99

board - - > bored.

CasualReader99
CasualReader99Lv5CasualReader99

Or do you mean it gets a bit overboard?

HatoYin
HatoYinLv5HatoYin

They need to add edit function really bad

CasualReader99:Or do you mean it gets a bit overboard?
KaneRafael
KaneRafaelLv5KaneRafael

Yes... Let's Look focus on his typos and not his review. Y'all are something else. So read it not?

ASB
ASBTranslatorASB

I have to agree. As I was translating this, I felt that the author was trying too hard to describe every single detail. HOWEVER, I urge you to keep on reading it. It gets cinematic and awesome after some time. It felt like I was translating Game of Throne! XD *probably overdid there but yeaa NO REGRETS*

HatoYin
HatoYinLv5HatoYin

But GOT characters are not cardboards. What's worst is that the mc doesn't.even deserves to be call a cardboard character..

ASB:I have to agree. As I was translating this, I felt that the author was trying too hard to describe every single detail. HOWEVER, I urge you to keep on reading it. It gets cinematic and awesome after some time. It felt like I was translating Game of Throne! XD *probably overdid there but yeaa NO REGRETS*
Democratis
DemocratisLv10Democratis

read it

KaneRafael:Yes... Let's Look focus on his typos and not his review. Y'all are something else. So read it not?
Democratis
DemocratisLv10Democratis

The beginning is ok for this novel, but it is probably my favorite webnovel right now (I have read the majority on this site <those that interest me>) and it is amazing especially where I am currently at chapter 245. Give it a try

KaneRafael:Yes... Let's Look focus on his typos and not his review. Y'all are something else. So read it not?
SaaRaaB
SaaRaaBLv12SaaRaaB

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