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bellwareLv24yr
2020-09-28 23:21

Dear Author, Please update. This is one of the best Book I’ve ever read and it has a great story development and tge way the involve the characters is just amazing. Eagerly waiting for your next update. Your reader❤️

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I've read till chapter 30 and tbh, I give up. The notion of little to no misunderstanding is interesting but the story it self is so lacking. No depth at all. Just from the first 5 chapters, we can see the events are highly illogical with no further explanation given. The plot is full of holes, I feel like reading a story from a 12-year-old. It lacks character introduction, inconsistent names / characters, rush story telling and weak world-building. Just from what I read so far, there are already a cannon fodder introduced and silenced without explanation whatsoever (ei. The girl who admired the expensive car). The romance? It was so abrupt you feel like "wait...what?". They fell for each other and get married in a few days. Instant trust, with no hint of romance at all. The only detailed description about the characters are on how they looks like (*insert a lot of desctiptive*). The MC has a weak character that suddenly turns aggressive (cat fight) just from a few insult. It's not like she's a transmigrator, reincarnator or an assassin with a mysterious background either, come on author! The only thing that's interesting is the male lead (not having a paralyzed cold face like other romance novel troupe). That's it. More than 3000+ chapters for this kind of story is not worth it. You might get dizzy from the constant plot-jumping, so be warned! I try to give this story a chance and I failed. I might be too harsh given that there are more decent Romance stories here lately, idk. I better off get to other novels here. Adieu.

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