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Nbvc
NbvcLv56yr
2018-04-17 02:14

Boring so far.... The little girl is too naive.. OH really. it a ancient time , where there is always a war going on. how can the little girl be a stupid crying baby. Im already confuse about what going on. At least she should have a ball stand up for herself.

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CrimsonShade
CrimsonShadeLv5

Just because its ancient times doesnt mean she has yet seen the horrors of war. There is still war in our world, look at the middle east. How many of teens have you seen who know what is happening in the world? She's an introvert and ***** whats wrong with it? Look at popular anime, there are many MCs who start off as ***** characters. Its called character development. Plus as far as i have read, this novel leans more toward comedy, not like those other novels which starts off with ruthless MCs and is filled with bloodshed. P.S. She is a girl, how can she have balls?!?!

CrimsonShade
CrimsonShadeLv5

N-a-i-v-e*

Nbvc
NbvcLv5

Oh common. Just because she a girl, doesn't mean she doesn't have common scene.

CrimsonShade
CrimsonShadeLv5

Yep. Ignore the whole comment and reply to a sarcastic P.S. Great!

Nbvc
NbvcLv5

Well, excuse me for being sarcastic. she for god shake is 13 year old, not a new born child who doesn't know to to spell ABC.

CrimsonShade
CrimsonShadeLv5

Either you are a troll or your comprehension is so bad that you cant understand what i wrote in my first comment. You still keep repeating similar line over and over but didn't reply to a single thing i wrote.

Nbvc
NbvcLv5

Well, excuse the fucking me. I'm not an idiot. I got what u said about the character development . I'm major in English not some fucking science that I can't understand what u said. Even so u have ur point and I fucking have my own point of view. Got it

Nbvc
NbvcLv5

Oh just a piece of advice Crimson shade , it your best interest not to pissed me off, since I'm already having bad days. Don't let me take me anger on u. Got it mister. Or do u want me to spell it out for u.

Nbvc
NbvcLv5

And MIND YOU OWN BUSINESS. I DIDNT ASKED FOR YOUR OPINIONS .

CrimsonShade
CrimsonShadeLv5

*sigh* you really do have some skills for pissing people off. If you got what i said, you could have given a relevant reply in the first place and i wouldn't have bothered anymore. But you still acted like an idiot, so dont get salty when i called you so. And a piece of advice for you as well, i m not afraid of you so dont try to scare me off. Its a freaking public review and i wrote a decent and non trollish comment. Dont act like you own this ****. If you dont want to then dont reply to me, who is forcing you? So stop acting like an immature brat and dont even try to threaten someone on internet. Lmao

Nbvc
NbvcLv5

Well, nobody asked for your opinion, one more thing mind ur own business,.

CrimsonShade
CrimsonShadeLv5

Well, nobody asked for yours either. Why did you write a review if u cant hold a si.mple discussion. Just ignore me.. lol

Nbvc
NbvcLv5

Lol .. sorry my bad it just things have been rough lately and got mad for no reason.

Nbvc
NbvcLv5

I hope u forgive me ..

Morty756483
Morty756483Lv6

Are both of you imitating some anime dialogs? So funny)

geot5
geot5Lv5

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