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ChocoLatte
ChocoLatteLv137yr
2018-03-06 03:29

I'd say that this is a pretty good read if you want something light with a touch of laugh. Yes, story is pretty predictable but it's still a good read all and all. Though I have a slight problem with the way translator swap first & last name. I mean, why fix something that isn't broken you know? CN novels & Chinese in general is surname first & the name itself is infront. It's been like this and it doesn't change. Because of that I'm quite uncomfortable reading the names whenever it comes up. I hope that the translator would fix this problem. (: Thanks for the translation. XOXO

Almighty Coach

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thestatsguy
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Website : qidian china Views : 660thousand Rating : 7.6(115) Chapters : 435 Status : ongoing Word count : 1.14million author level : lv5 No of works : 2 If you are interested, my reviews are in almost every novel with atleast 3 likes. Please do not reply for this review, as this is an ongoing novel, I would like to update it time to time in my replies. Like is suffice to show your appreciation.

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XLKIR007
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sports? no tha.......... *sees system* ok flip the rules flip the regulations flip the judges flip the heavens and flip you fifa SYSTEM-CHAN!!!!!!!!!

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WildAnt
WildAntLv12

refreshing novel. the first sports genre qidian novel I ever read. in chapter 1 the translation is nice and the editing is good, at least for me. cant wait to continue reading this novel. and to those saying its insult to sport lol read the book first before saying anything. if you still insist to doesnt like this novel then i suggest you don't read it

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lifesketcher
lifesketcherLv15

Okay so I thought I'd be into this, but as someone who works out this novel really underplays the amount of effort and pain that I go through =p not saying it's bad but I just can't read it cus someone telling you "techniques" doesnt enable you to do pull ups if you havent slowly built up the upper body strength.

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KoFu_
KoFu_Lv6

Basically you can skip most of the chapter and you don't miss anything important. The MC is retarded as ****. Gains a scanner of good athletes near 10 meters of him and doesn't abuse it. Has an almighty Wikipedia voice in the head (that is really baby spoon feed basic information like it was a hidden knowledge of the mighty sage) and doesn't ask or test the limits of his answers to plan the most efficient way to use his powers. I already said he is retarded, but why? Well I only read until the chapter 10 but I couldn't stand it anymore. You have a one time buff time for a beginner chest and you want to use it immediately without none to train ? are you stupid? Then, the system tells him numerous times that he can train random people...WHy can't he do it in the spare time he has ? He only trains the fat kids like a part-time job! Use the maximum time of your buff dude !! And then he has a genius (insert meme genius here) idea to say...HEY ! I can train 8 fats kids, if I can train 10.000 kids of high school I can be richhh! Jesus ****...what the **** the author is thinking. Dropped. Don't waste your time. 2 Stars because no harem or horny Chinese idiot.

7yr
kseriousr
kseriousrLv4

The story breaks the third law of Newton. There's little to no action and a helluvalot reaction. When will this trend die? I feel guilty reading this. It feels like a story meant for the kid who wants everyone to praise him and stroke his ego. Lots of useless stuff that can easily be cut to make the story compact and engaging .

7yr
Chao
ChaoLv11

Translation quality is solid, flows fine and has minor grammatical errors (usage of has/have etc). Story is about a guy that gets a system towards coaching, looks to be the typical being amazing and having others witness how amazing the MC is. There's little to no world building yet, but some world building is expected since the MC's system is about coaching and that'll involve international sports at one point. MC is just a blank slate really, and other characters are there to make him look good.

7yr
FujiCigarette
FujiCigaretteLv5

TL quality - 4.5/5 - you can perfectly understand the story and the errors can be ignored very easily Update speed 5/5 - good daily updates also some very great mass releases its a fairly new novel to this site and it already has 300+ chapters Story Development 5/5 - its a refreshing story that breaks norms while mc always have something to deal with it aint the normal unreasonable plot that plagues other novels Character Design 5/5 - it has great background characters and the author is really good at coming up with different characters that feel real World background 5/5 - oh good plain old earth, problems that plague chinese authors are racism but in this story the author actually researches about other countries which is great only gripe i have with this novel is that its the type of novel you can only enjoy if you binge it... its very enjoyable having a lot of chapters to read but will leave you wanting more if you read only 1 chapter a day

6yr
yoohime
yoohimeLv6

i like the beginning will read it and put it on my reading list d d d d j. j. j. gg. g. h. h. h h h h h h h h h h h h h h hh h h g g g. d

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