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KoFu_
KoFu_Lv67yr
2018-03-23 03:48

Basically you can skip most of the chapter and you don't miss anything important. The MC is retarded as ****. Gains a scanner of good athletes near 10 meters of him and doesn't abuse it. Has an almighty Wikipedia voice in the head (that is really baby spoon feed basic information like it was a hidden knowledge of the mighty sage) and doesn't ask or test the limits of his answers to plan the most efficient way to use his powers. I already said he is retarded, but why? Well I only read until the chapter 10 but I couldn't stand it anymore. You have a one time buff time for a beginner chest and you want to use it immediately without none to train ? are you stupid? Then, the system tells him numerous times that he can train random people...WHy can't he do it in the spare time he has ? He only trains the fat kids like a part-time job! Use the maximum time of your buff dude !! And then he has a genius (insert meme genius here) idea to say...HEY ! I can train 8 fats kids, if I can train 10.000 kids of high school I can be richhh! Jesus ****...what the **** the author is thinking. Dropped. Don't waste your time. 2 Stars because no harem or horny Chinese idiot.

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HatoYin
HatoYinLv5

Umm.... You know even in the novel world there are such things as common sense? Can u imagine an inexperience choach propagating how he can improve your ability in sports? Will you believe him? The reason why he can even teach those fat kids is vecausebthe association just wanted someone to fill in the spot to maintain their reputation of professionalism.... Jeez dun tell me u r turned off by realistic society in this novel?

Mors13
Mors13Lv3

Ha i can agree that any work that does not devolve into the authors perverted wish fulfillment fantasy is worth 2 stars even if the story is otherwise trash

KoFu_
KoFu_Lv6

Well if you advertise like a moron no one is gonna believe you. Plus there are tons of ways to teach for free. Idk go to a public sport place and maybe try to give tips or advices. Maybe the system take that as training? You can't justify his lack of brain to juicr that sweet buff whatever you saidm he didn't even tried.

HatoYin:Umm.... You know even in the novel world there are such things as common sense? Can u imagine an inexperience choach propagating how he can improve your ability in sports? Will you believe him? The reason why he can even teach those fat kids is vecausebthe association just wanted someone to fill in the spot to maintain their reputation of professionalism.... Jeez dun tell me u r turned off by realistic society in this novel?
JamBasic
JamBasicLv5

Nah. I thinks its just how the author wants it to be. A dumb mc. Though its going to be hard to read with such character. It gets worth it when you see them improve. Its a writing style for character developement. Read Overgeared Kor nov. Mc is a dumbass. Got well over time. But still I feel you. It stresses me just thinking what will I do in his situation that he don't . And we can't see how he'll improve... *sighs

KoFu_
KoFu_Lv6

From a moron to a normal human with rational thought? Jesus if I have to read 200 chapters to get there I'm gonna kill myself. Why don't start with a normal rational human with a little bit of innocence and then have it betrayed/scammed/etc and have to be more cautious on the future? IDK I think I expect too much, like a rational horror movie when the kids don't separate and face the single monster with all the 20 kids of the camp.

JamBasic:Nah. I thinks its just how the author wants it to be. A dumb mc. Though its going to be hard to read with such character. It gets worth it when you see them improve. Its a writing style for character developement. Read Overgeared Kor nov. Mc is a dumbass. Got well over time. But still I feel you. It stresses me just thinking what will I do in his situation that he don't . And we can't see how he'll improve... *sighs
JamBasic
JamBasicLv5

Author and his bad character planning.

KoFu_:From a moron to a normal human with rational thought? Jesus if I have to read 200 chapters to get there I'm gonna kill myself. Why don't start with a normal rational human with a little bit of innocence and then have it betrayed/scammed/etc and have to be more cautious on the future? IDK I think I expect too much, like a rational horror movie when the kids don't separate and face the single monster with all the 20 kids of the camp.
DeZun
DeZunLv14

ever heard of overgeared?

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