Review Detail of Jackrabbit_Gee in Unrivaled Medicine God

basically just bad pacing, I think. I mean it's... fine? there's nothing really wrong with it per se. I think my biggest problem with this story is that in order to really understand what's going on you have to be familiar with Wuxia novels. this is fine as the Target Audience is obviously people on WebNovel. the Problem is the Author feels the need to take several pages to explain things we should already be able to figure out. For example, A very intense scene with a man BLEADING OUT ON THE FLOOR is just pushed to the side while two people just like, talk? and stare angrily while reminiscing?? So yeah, flow of the story is really odd in certain places and the pacing is off.