Jackrabbit_Gee
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basically just bad pacing, I think. I mean it's... fine? there's nothing really wrong with it per se. I think my biggest problem with this story is that in order to really understand what's going on you have to be familiar with Wuxia novels. this is fine as the Target Audience is obviously people on WebNovel. the Problem is the Author feels the need to take several pages to explain things we should already be able to figure out. For example, A very intense scene with a man BLEADING OUT ON THE FLOOR is just pushed to the side while two people just like, talk? and stare angrily while reminiscing?? So yeah, flow of the story is really odd in certain places and the pacing is off.
oh so THAT'S how babies are made
jeez author sucks at pronouns
I dont understand why he is so angry. He seemed to be a standard Otaku and got to fulfill every Otakus DREAM. Getting superpowers and living in a fantasy world. I mean sure he was told WHY he had those powers but still I would be very grateful in his position
did you mean physique?