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Finally finished this with fast passes! No alt accounts, just three chapters a day! Was it worth it? Unfortunately all feelings pointing to kind of. A great start a middle with so much potential followed by a slow death as all that is wrapped up as quickly as possible. The loose ends just keep happening and only the bare minimum is brought to any conclusion. The Link/Celine romance felt genuine and meaningful and as soon as it was consummated it's done. Link moves right on to the next lady without a thought, and the next, and the next. Most characters are flat out ignored, greatest swordsman in the north? No matter lets focus on getting that dragon queen poon, mercenary company's members? Only when it's convenient to get some named fodder people will recognize. The reviews called it and I didn't listen, the end is horribly rushed and full of plot holes. What drove the story was it's own undoing, the bad guy coming just left so much left aside nothing was done and it pulled open plot holes you could drive a truck thru. A great story pulled into mediocrity.

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Advent of the Archmage

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