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StampedingSquirrel
StampedingSquirrelLv56yr
2018-10-10 01:41

Well, looks generic enough. King of assassins/mercenaries? Check. Reincarnation? Check. Martial/mystical arts world? Check. Crippled potential/body constitution/cultivation? Check. Adult mc on his second life acting like a spoiled and clueless child? Check. Loses your girl and has to get her back? Check. Duels to death against anyone who has slighted mc? Check. Young master antagonists? Check. Repetitive plot? Check. Same old plot devices, plot armor, tropes and cliches? Check. ‘Nuff said.

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SorcererCat
SorcererCatLv5

If you want to read something less generic and cliche then check this out: https://forum.webnovel.com/d/9338-demon-s-diary

_VA_
_VA_Lv4

You've read it?

RandomWeirdDude
RandomWeirdDudeLv5

The chapters came out, you should probably delete this, noone is gonna spend energy stones on this

Mute
MuteLv13

I don't mind cliche but everything is done badly, no character acts older than 5, there's no subtlety anywhere, just people being 2d cunts to MC, MC being an arrogant cunt back and then a fight ensues, even the elder act and talk like teenagers.

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Heretoc
HeretocLv4

I am not sure how people are praising the story. Because of them I went ahead and read till almost 500 chapters. After each chapter I had to convince myself that its still too early and maybe the good part is coming. But no more. The story is crap. Overused cliches in the worst way possible. Author uses every single trope possible. Whether it's the carriage carrying some high profile , running through the city and killing people in the way or stupid enemies from auctions. Restaurant table cliche? Done... MCs power is special. Bull ****. It's just devouring and increasing own cultivation. God of slaughter is the same, that War God Soul novel is the same, Eternal King is the same. I don't even remember how many novels are there which have growing spirit. MC is also just a bull. Running everywhere without thinking of the consequences. An dlater he cries saying he needs to be stronger. And this has already happened 15-20 times in 500 chapters Sect is basically the low level copy paste of all other novels. Including the Gangs inside and the sects top child being its leader. Boooriiiing. And sect fights every few chapters. Can't they fucking use something new? It's also done on the most boring way possible. One good thing is amount of filler. It's less. But side stories are so much that it doesn't matters. Overall rating? Overrated thrash. Waste of time. U less you have nothing to read. It's not the worst thing out there but it's just too monotonous and boring. It's like salted chips. Bland. And usual. Basically you can never go wrong with it. As its so tried and tested that it should get an award for it.

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