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Ryusy
RyusyLv57yr
2018-03-11 03:32

Oh my god, the translation quality is goddamn bad. I dont event know who is the retard one, author or the translator. The MC is fucking idot with a wife. When he ia having a wife, the author give him 3 potential new heroin, the other characters are split into 2 : 1. Really good people with honest personality 2. Fucking retarded **** who think he is a god The more idot thing is, he got skill book, poison master for "PRIESTS" and fucking revive for "KNIGHT". And in the next chapter, humanoid monster thiev class have poison skill on them And the most basic thing the mc should do, to add friend the studio owners after he got into the game, but he didn't, its coz the author want to make the mc look so awesome and give exaggerated comment on the mc when he reveal who he was in the game Overall, this novel is so basic, the translation is shiet, but who i am to judge. I only can leave a review.

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Octaeon
OctaeonLv10

Leaving a review is basically judging =P But overall, seeing all the bad reviews, I'm discouraged... :(

eondir
eondirLv5

nice job

AlexNeo
AlexNeoLv11

Lol I think I like never read the novel. The 3 girls is just a tease. They will have their own guys in the future that’s not the Mc. No Harem Here

Ryusy
RyusyLv5

Is that so? When i dont have anything to read sometimes i considering re read this novel, but you actually read so far ahead, is it getting beter?

AlexNeo:Lol I think I like never read the novel. The 3 girls is just a tease. They will have their own guys in the future that’s not the Mc. No Harem Here
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hhhhhhhyugLv3

True I feel u

Shiro_MSFA
Shiro_MSFALv4

Please review my novel EEWAO. Eng-V (Game novel blue white cover) Im still learning tho. Please help me fix my novel by review wich wrong wich right. I take bad comment, but please show me wich part that need fix. Your review will really really make me happy. Thanks. Hope u have a nice day :)

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