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DaoistHarvey
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2024-04-18 12:41

Just a great novel overall. It feels like the MC is unlucky yet lucky at the same time, kept on getting targetted by misfortune but strong enough with luck to survive. Idk much about guns but war stuff and survival part so far are great, well wirtten. I haven't seen plot holes so far or maybe i missed them. MC being part of that tribe was just amazing, I got emotional when he has to leave, hope they see each other again.

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ThatOneGUy
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I like this alot, as an amateur gunsmith who learned in a professional environment although the knowledge shown is somewhat superficial in regards to firearms and tactics in some ways it does scratch my itch, my only issue is updating frequency, I wish the author would just update and rhere would be like 15 translated chapters for me to binge through in one sitting, overall a great piece of fiction to pass the time to, this novel is a piece of fresh air and at least the author did some research because many on this platform I've tried before have none and its overall a horrible read for those because the people are writing scenes involving firearms when they know next to nothing about them to an extent they will confuse a clip with a magazine or because of lack of knowledge do ludicrous fight scenes like a person going in for close combat with a combat knife when they have the high ground and an advantage and it could be ended in seconds with one well placed shot but because they don't know the rifle the character has is accurate at that range they go in and do a melee battle because that's all they are familiar with, in real life gun fights only take at most a minute or two to kill your opponent typically, but obviously it depends, I like this novel where the character had his mind wired up focused where he acknowledges every detail like a super computer making detailed descriptions for us the reader of something that happens in seconds, meaning something that could be anticlimactic, because of the authors skill turns into something epic, I just hope he doesn't stretch fight scenes into like 8 chapters for something that was only 3 minutes of action in actuality. Overall I love this, write more so I can binge!

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