Well this is my sugestion for you : Good side : - Interesting character - Easy to read Bad side : a bit spoiler - I dont get it why the MC is so rash and softie. I feel it become contradiction because actually he is smart and have strong wisdom that how the story line tell us. - I dont know how to say this mmmmm...that the story say he have character merchant but he lose so much. - He doesnt know politic, but still fooling around with noble. (I feel like crying now trust me.) Well the think make this bad because contradiction for what actually the MC do and the story line say. So, I mean example if he is hot blooded, he will love fight and easy get angry but if we make the contradiction that line become like this "He doesnt love to fight and calm person". Well this is still just my opinion but actually this story have well background but the story line sometimes tell us the spoiler, you can say that I more like doesnt know because it will have more surprise and we can feel the helpless side in MC.
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LIKEWell the story actually is not that bad however is still not my cup of tea. Because I dont like the mc personality, however if we talk about the magic in the story is still have a good performance and have well detailed explanation for magic.
Well the story actually is not that bad however is still not my cup of tea. Because I dont like the mc personality, however if we talk about the magic in the story is still have a good performance and have well detailed explanation for magic.