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Lonelytree
LonelytreeLv67yr
2017-10-30 04:22

Translation quality, update stability, character design and world building are 5 stars worthy. My issue is with the Character Design. This two must be the most dense person I've ever met. Every single chapter I want to shake the MC awake or slap her or do something to pull her back to reality. Use your freaking words, woman! Then, I went back to check the raw and realized the author intended to create such characters. They are supposed to be 虐心 [translation: Heart torment]. So, I guess... job well done? So 5 stars for accomplishing what the author set out to do.

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maki
makiLv5

Would you prefer this or the novel you're currently translating? 😂 😂

Lonelytree
LonelytreeLv6

The one I'm translating or I would have picked this to translate myself :P To each their own but I can't stand the mc and ml here XD

maki:Would you prefer this or the novel you're currently translating? 😂 😂
Darkai
DarkaiLv4

Thank you for translating this novel

Saturnjupiter
SaturnjupiterLv15

I will most likely read this but I'm going to wait til chapter 300 cuz I will flip my sh*t if I have to go through the " Heart torment" :)

O_O
O_OLv10

This has around 900 chapters and the story seems to continue without either of them finding out about the others' feelings till the end, probably at around chapter 700-750. I think I'll wait for this to finish coz reading chapters individually, 2-3 per day is gonna be so cringy coz the story progresses so slowly. I also agree with the dense comment. It'd all end in about 50 chapters if either of them had courage to say something to the other :3 According to the manga tho, the sister of the main female lead and the stepmother of the male lead are the people who cause most confusion, the story doesn't seem to be following the first part tho.

Lonelytree
LonelytreeLv6

The manga and the novel's plots are a bit different.

O_O:This has around 900 chapters and the story seems to continue without either of them finding out about the others' feelings till the end, probably at around chapter 700-750. I think I'll wait for this to finish coz reading chapters individually, 2-3 per day is gonna be so cringy coz the story progresses so slowly. I also agree with the dense comment. It'd all end in about 50 chapters if either of them had courage to say something to the other :3 According to the manga tho, the sister of the main female lead and the stepmother of the male lead are the people who cause most confusion, the story doesn't seem to be following the first part tho.
MiyukiJade
MiyukiJadeLv3

900 chapters?? 😱 omg

O_O:This has around 900 chapters and the story seems to continue without either of them finding out about the others' feelings till the end, probably at around chapter 700-750. I think I'll wait for this to finish coz reading chapters individually, 2-3 per day is gonna be so cringy coz the story progresses so slowly. I also agree with the dense comment. It'd all end in about 50 chapters if either of them had courage to say something to the other :3 According to the manga tho, the sister of the main female lead and the stepmother of the male lead are the people who cause most confusion, the story doesn't seem to be following the first part tho.
Cherrycastillo
CherrycastilloLv13

Oh come on 900 is very far away right now theyre still in 200plus chapters...pls keep on uploading...and by d way where i can find the comic version?pls need ur help...thank you...

Lonelytree
LonelytreeLv6

You might want to check with the translator, I'm not sure myself.

Cherrycastillo:Oh come on 900 is very far away right now theyre still in 200plus chapters...pls keep on uploading...and by d way where i can find the comic version?pls need ur help...thank you...
AngelicaBM
AngelicaBMLv10

This so true its like I'm reading I great published book

VixonAzaria
VixonAzariaLv2

Intresting

nedelrem
nedelremLv10

i feel you,... everytime i read that how they hide their feelings and prevent their real emotion ...i just wanna smash my phone in the floor its so frustrating.... but its worth it.. i got so addicted cant help my sefl... cant wait for the next chapter.. thank you so much for translating this...

Ophylam
OphylamLv5

Word 😤

Darkai:Thank you for translating this novel
Ophylam
OphylamLv5

Lmao welcome back then mwahahah

Saturnjupiter:I will most likely read this but I'm going to wait til chapter 300 cuz I will flip my sh*t if I have to go through the " Heart torment" :)
elainerenee_0912
elainerenee_0912Lv11

900 chapters but now only 310 chapters.. OMG everyday 4 chapter updated 2 in the morning 2 in the evening.. 147days left to be finish...its to long...

elainerenee_0912
elainerenee_0912Lv11

Is it true this have a comic book? The comic book already translated in English?

mayo8863
mayo8863Lv5

Thumbs up to the story and thumbs up too to the translator.... thanks ang keep it up!.

caiiyoo
caiiyooLv2

Where can i find the comic version of this?? 😭

Lv3

Interesting story

soshee
sosheeLv10

Thank you for translating so often!

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