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nyanyan_sensei
nyanyan_senseiLv56yr
2018-03-13 23:04

Sooo this one has been on my recommendation list for a long time. I was bored reading cultivation novel, and this one has a female lead with a touch of romance so it piqued my curiosity. Let me review it so far (chapter 102): Translation quality is...well, I guess acceptable, with mistakes here and there. Actually I'm not a native english myself, so I don't usually naggy about grammatical mistake as long as it isn't too horrendous and I get the overall meaning. But the mistakes I found make me dizzy. At some point the translation said "she" and sudeenly turned to "he" when referring to same person. What the hell? So did she get found out cross dressing or not? And worse, it got repeated over and over again. I gave up trying to understand. As for updating stability, I'm not really sure cuz I just joined the ride and binge read this at once. Hope it's following the promised released rate, as to give a reason why the quality is at times barely acceptabe,or else I might feel really disappointed. Story development is not really good. The pace is jumping from quick to sloow as hell and then take a sudden thrust, then it slowed again just to accelerate. Some events got a really detailed explanation, some just mentioned on passing, few sweeped out, and even there's some event I couldn't fugure out what the **** exactly happened. Really, the element of surprise is so strong in this one. Character design is not so bad, but not good either. The male lead makes me curious and hidden in mystery (as far as I read). Actually that was the main reason I insist to continue reading. The female lead transformation is too steep, and her skill as assassin is too damn high. The worst thing about her is I dont have a clue about her previous life's world. Was she an esper? What the heck with that over 9000 teleport ability? So fucking no clue! As for other characters, they seemed bland. And idiot. And too gullible. And inconsistent. 🙄 Her father is...weird. He acted not caring at beginning, and suddenly turned into pampering caring daddy for some reason I cannot accept. Too. Damn. Fast. Female lead is awesome at transforming people around her. The antagonists are too wicked, brainless, cocky, and other usual troves you found in antagonistics character of soap operas. They shows their ugly sides plainly, no smart scheming, no fun or interesting twist, just plainly wicked. Hope this one getting better in later chapters. As I said before, world background is mystery. Not much explanation about her current world (besides kingdom and clan stuffs, others only mentioned in short passing), or the previous one. Really, when you said a modern human world, my imagination assumed that it was our current world on Earth. Maybe a little bit in future, but not a world with espers, or exorcist, or other superpower beings. Just couldn't imagine this right. Maybe mine is too bland, or too realistic to say. A bit over 100 chapters and the world explained are only the basics one, her family, her kingdom, a bit of clans, a very slight information about male lead. But you know what grind my gears the most? Its the FUCKING FOOT NOTES THAT PLAINLY SPILL THE SPOILERS OH MY GAWDD!! Dear translator, please don't do things outside your job of translating the story. To sum it up, I probably will stop for now. I'm too stupified with the development that turned so sharp and made it more unacceptable. Hoping some news that this story got better by other diligent readers. I'll just put this on the side to collect some dust and new chapters. See you then.

Entangled with An Evil Lord

Mu Danfeng
4.5
3068 Chs

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fluffy_bone
fluffy_boneLv5

On point! Im only at chapter 93 but i already repeatedly want to stop, everything is making me dizzy and the translation is so poor didn't help at all with the messy story. I don't recommend this novel to those people who have a little to no tolerance and patience.

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redbeans
redbeansLv1

About the synopsis of chinese original，here is general meaning： 'hi，handsome guy，can i grab your clothes？' , a girl suddenly disrobes a demon prince who is concentrating on practice and then escapes freely. Seconds later，the guy realized what had happened。(#ﾟДﾟ).. he ordered to catch her angrily ......... He is a king of this world. noble, handsome and marblehearted. She is the king of modern assassins. talented but incompatible and venomous. For her，he was a scorpoin，she avoided him eagerly. but he traced her all the time. People said she was a female demon. but for he，she was exclusive property. he said i can forgive those who insulted me，but I'll kill all the person who insulted her.(｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ please ignore my poor english_(:з」∠)_

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Humble_Man
Humble_ManLv3

An amazing novel, best for girls and people who like female protagonist. A touch of comedy, inspiration, journey, adventure, rebirth, betrayal, love, constitutes all factors. An amazing dish with touch of all spices. it gets really exciting in chapters ahead.

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LuluoO
LuluoOLv13

The start of this novel is very good, especially a first meeting of main characters. It was funny... Male lead is very intriguing and secretive. Can't wait to see a future development of the story.

7yr
BLUEPHOENIX
BLUEPHOENIXLv4

Reveal spoiler

6yr
Nre
NreLv4

Great novel with female protagonist. Although similar to other novels. The sad part however is that the chapters are too shOrt. .

7yr
MountainofBooks
MountainofBooksLv4

Hilarious 😂👍🏻 I was dying of laughter while reading, those two are just so alike sometimes. Great novel, I can’t wait for the next chapter to be translated

6yr
TEWTEW
TEWTEWLv11

At first I thought this story was interesting and well written... as time went on there were more and more holes in the story. Random things would happen with no reason, and characters would do things randomly out of their character. The story makes no sense anymore. I’m on chapter 70 and I’ve already given up on following up with the story. There are also a few translation errors, but the story is updated fast!

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au18
au18Lv5

Transmigration story. Interesting premise so far. As of chapter 60, seems like a smart and strong female protagonist, hopefully it stays that way.

7yr
WanderingSage
WanderingSageLv5

Not much to talk about after only 20 chapters. However some things are clear. Chapters are half length like in Hidden Marriage, so 20 chapters/week is basically 10 chapters/week for a 'normal' novel. Also I totally expect it to follow all tropes of 'Female MC Who Transmigrates to Ancient World' the way the book is going right now. I have limited my expectations and so I won't be disappointed when there is nothing original. My future ratings will depend upon how well these tropes are implemented, however it will never get over 4 stars from me here. Also the Chinese RAWs have around 1k chapters and they are still being updated, so this novel may very well go on to have like 3k-4k chapters finally (pure speculation i haven't read any of them so they might end on 1.5k for all we know). Just a bit of warning.

7yr
angeson
angesonLv5

Very good work,but lack originally compared to same line novels.the story has too many cliche,and you can pretty much guess what gonna happen. But I have to say they did a good work on translating this.congrats,

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