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LejlaLv56yr
2019-02-03 00:21

At first i was very excited about this novel, it was refreshing, strong female lead, assertive male lead and logical plot. I am disappointed to say that as the chapters progress, unnecessary filler chapters waste your ss and annoying amnesia/misunderstandings plot twists contribute nothing to the overall development-instead the characters find themselves in square one. In terms of characters, half of them disappear from time to time (do not contribute to the story) and reappear to once again do nothing 50 chapters later. The main female lead esspecially (idk if it's the writing or just how the character is) finds herself being extremely logical to the point of being unrealistic or extremely emotionally ***** and childish in thought and action. Myself and unfortunately many others are still reading this novel and if you were to unlock the most recent chapter to read the comments you will find yourself amongst a lot of frustrated readers. Why do we continue to read you ask? We are unfortunately invested in the novel, like i said it was bearable and new in the beginning leading us to a false sense of hope that things will get better (it doesnt and probably wont at this rate and direction of plot). If you dont want to waste hundreds of ss on silly chapters or god forbid *repeating chapters* i recommend reading another novel of similar genre and plot which there seems to be a lot of. Let this be a warning for future heartbreak and insanity.

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