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Ancient_God
Ancient_GodLv67yr
2017-11-20 16:50

I rarely want to write a review, but this time, I iust can't stand it. I really don't know how this novel get into second rank in weekly vote nor do I know why those people who gave 5 stars review only has "zero chaps read" in their stats. But the one thing I know is, this novel is really a compilation of FULL OF TRASH ! Very bad that even with my quite easy to satisfied reading preferences refuse this novel! I am not talking about preference kind of stories, nor did I do this for a black campaign, but this novel really does it in a most TRASHY ways.. The MC is a hypocrite, full of nonsense justice, but his actions latter contradicts his sense of justice, the world revolves arround him (many MC like this). Those things I can accept. The logic of the story is nonsense, e.g: the monster hit the MC with a giant hammer with the speed of sound in close quarter combat and mc got to dodge it by ducking down while his body is only in a normal citizen level, and there is no sonic boom accompanying that hammer who's moving at a speed of sound? This kind of stupid logic I can also live with that. When the world is in danger, and all the world's leaders gather in one place, all the world's most beautiful minds thinking of a way to survive but can't think of anything except to receive that fate and die, here comes the time the MC to shine, by proposing a stupid idea that any 10 years old kid should know and the whole world sing a song of genius praises to him! And this happens many times! This doesn't prove that the MC is a genius (like the author intend to do), this only proves that the whole world are just a bunch of idiots. And I wonder how they even manage to live this long before the MC transmigrate a month ago? This I can't accept. The MC only show you that 1+1 is 2 and einstein class genius would praise him for MC's genius. What a stupid novel. Read it at your discretion, I'm sure you will be disapointed, don't trust the vote and assume this is a good story, and last thing, you have been warned !

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Kittycarr
KittycarrLv5

Okay ... so you do not like the story ... I forgive you. I really do .... I like the story, the story line and see so much potential in it. I am thankful the translator is taking his time and putting so much effort in providing his readers the chapters. Not everyone can be happy ...

Ancient_God
Ancient_GodLv6

You liking the story is your choice as mine disliking it. I never seek or need anyone's forgiveness to say and choose wether I like something or not, it is my rights.

Kittycarr:Okay ... so you do not like the story ... I forgive you. I really do .... I like the story, the story line and see so much potential in it. I am thankful the translator is taking his time and putting so much effort in providing his readers the chapters. Not everyone can be happy ...
Daoist_Matt
Daoist_MattLv10

I completely agree. I dont write reviews, but i did for this one. The author was trash. Potential in the idea for a story, some of the worst execution ive ever seen.

Sanji555
Sanji555Lv5

Every body has there choice

Ancient_God:You liking the story is your choice as mine disliking it. I never seek or need anyone's forgiveness to say and choose wether I like something or not, it is my rights.
Sanji555
Sanji555Lv5

Every body has there choice

Ancient_God:You liking the story is your choice as mine disliking it. I never seek or need anyone's forgiveness to say and choose wether I like something or not, it is my rights.
Mappan
MappanLv4

Sure, but the writer should read the review and should remake the novel... Update it

Kittycarr:Okay ... so you do not like the story ... I forgive you. I really do .... I like the story, the story line and see so much potential in it. I am thankful the translator is taking his time and putting so much effort in providing his readers the chapters. Not everyone can be happy ...
Joshua_Nuel
Joshua_NuelLv3

This dumbass review makes it hard for me to believe we read the same book.

Joshua_Nuel
Joshua_NuelLv3

This dumbass review makes it hard for me to believe we read the same book.

fred2eq
fred2eqLv1

hey not bad but there's a new trending story on board why don't you give it a try THE UNCANNY CANINES

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rynnix
rynnixLv5

The novel starts off quite interesting. As is typical with the trend of transmigration stories, MC doesn't think twice about being teleported to another world- that's completely ok, actually. His transmigration and his immediate assimilation into the world can be excused, despite the fact that he came from a world of familiar smartphones and not a world with a jumbled mix of advanced "ring" systems, ancient relics, and wacky monsters. That one point. That is excusable. However, much like credit card debt, you cannot declare bankruptcy the second time. It would appear as though the author definitively planned out the first 20 or so chapters of the story- it feels pretty realistic, and the MC's wits show through in a manner that engages the reader, despite his crippling handicap. Ever present in the background was his impending death, as his lifespan was essentially crippled to around 3 months. Then, the warning signs begin to show. His cheat skill, a sort of system, activates and immediately catapults him to importance by granting him the ability to summon monsters he kills, which the translator terms "Imperial Censure". There is no explanation on how this role fits into society, simply that the role is "exclusive" and represents "high status". What else does it do? Allow him to copy skills, for one. Instantly, MC is a comprehension genius. The author's lazy writing starts to show through here, around the assessment arc. MC enters desert. Desert has sand monsters. Fight sand monster, summon sand monster. Mutated?! Joy! The above is literally how the world building in this novel works. Author throws out a random location, describes it with a line or two, and then focuses back on MC. This could be remedied if the MC was adequately fleshed out, but that doesn't occur, either. The whole reason the MC is joining the assessment is because his system would've deserted him otherwise, because apparently the transmigration, monster, and OP system tropes weren't enough- the author needs a quest aspect as well. What else happens? MC meets possibly the most overpowered character in the entire story (literally a surviving half god) and his blood somehow managed to revive her. Then, she instantly heals his crippled lifespan. He subsequently proceeds to learn an Epic skill from watching her brew tea. Afterwards, he returns to the assessment like nothing happened. Yeah. However, I digress. Overall, the author attempts to demonstrate the MC's prowess at the expense of world building and other characters. Bai Yan, the main antagonist, was initially portrayed as aloof- he stated he wouldn't kill the MC because the MC was week. Flash forward 2 days and Bai Yan now picks fights whenever MC says anything. In public. What? MC apparently is the only one with brains as well. With an impending monster horde, there's no way for everyone to escape. What should they do? MC suggests rather plainly that they could group up and fight- author throws in some random locations to make MC seem smarter, and everyone reacts as if MC is a genius. He's really not. Even his power is borrowed. And what he does have came from plot armor. He's essentially a vessel that is given "personality" by the secret seeds of wish fulfillment within our hearts- nothing more. If you value world building and character development, don't read this. If you're willing to turn off your brain and become one of the numerous other side characters that fawn over the MC, then I guess you could give it a shot. *Translation and editing are both really basic. I do not profess to be competely adept at grammar, but as a native, the choppy sentences are quite numerous. Additionally, the word choice is extremely bland and basic. On the flip side, I guess there's at least a semblance of uniformity across the mundane story, cardboard MC, and uninteresting descriptions. I hope the irony of this praise is not lost to you.

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