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2018-02-06 06:22

good story that follows the life of a unfortunate soul (died from electrocution after getting out of the shower let's be real not the best way to die) the main character starts of a bit 2d knows almost nothing of the world not even including the previous body owners memories weak to the point of dying from a cold (this is how the original body owner got replaced) and last but not least can see his "stats" in the corner of his eyes sounds like the average hey i died but now i am in a different world so far. but from this point it gets beter after he finds out about the potential he gets from tragedie artifacts "he thinks it's from rare gems at first" to upgrade his stats 0.3% in a state of his choosing for every 100% potential or a 1 rank skill upgrade of his valid skill list for every 100% potential sounds like not a bad deal but it gets increasingly harder to reach 100% not a to OP system but still gives him an early advantage it can do a bit more than this but let's not go in the details as for the story so far "chap 135" it has a lot of good action not the standard gets massive upgrade thanks to some random break tru halfway the fight "im looking at u coiling dragon" most important it seems like it has a far ahead planed story line not some random fight get stronger the fight some more so far there are 4 to 6 different small stories linked to the main char 1 the obvious martial art story helping his dojo to not collapse characters involved are mostly his master , senior brother , senior sister and the newly formed martial alliance 2 the golden hoop / detective story this 1 seems to run to an end but probably gonna be linked to the others at the point of meeting the mysterious master of wite eagle 3 the "magical" part of the story avenge the dead of the old antique store owner digging deeper in the mysteries of the world 4 family part of the story his uncle's inheritance of some sort of for most part underworld power house group 5 the "romance" part of the story potential love interests so far ar, his step sister , brorther con and over protective Felicity the wealthy girl he met on the day at the lake ,later she gives him a recommendation so he can enter a i think "private" library finds some old banned book that describes "treasure" location and this story part is on hold to be explored with her next school break and the latest 1 eliza: sister of golden hoop NR 6 aka Su Lin not sure if this is gone be a 1 sided crush of some real development is gonna happen too early to tell there ar more very brief hints at female's liking the mc but nothing substantial 6 the latest part of the story i read seems to be breaking the barrier of grand master and reaching a more advanced version of power this seems to be mostly linked to the golden hoop NR 6 aka Su Lin and his military background family but for the most part i am really interested in this part of the Synopsis "However, his journey doesn’t end with Garen. Instead this is but the first of many bodies that Luo Jing will come to wield in his mystical journey between worlds." i am realy wondering how this is gonna be pulled of maybe another tragic dead or perhaps some form of ascension is he gone keep his skils a new world or the same 1 but a different continent don't forget the world is not even fully mapped yet or gets a new game+ kind of vibe maybe like a free potential point reset i dont know but i am certainly waiting in anticipation on how this story develops the 1 thing i hope for not to happen is a reset every 300+ chapters making every single last character we have come to like and love obsolete so far it's a great novel but hey don't take my word for it it's better to read all of it on our own

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