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iamLint
iamLintLv157yr
2017-10-30 03:47

Come on people its been more than 5 weeks , kindly vote for this awesome story. The idea is new and fresh expecting to experience multiple stories which froge the MC to have a Strong Unyielding character and a powerful knowledge of cultivation just like the MC of Emperors Domination so please vote.

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Sanks009
Sanks009Lv4

For the sake of 5 spirit stones, I shall vote this from today

Leylin_Farlier
Leylin_FarlierLv13

Nobody wants to see him forged, people want a strong determined MC who picks up cultivation fairly easily.

iamLint
iamLintLv15

Then there won't be a challenge to the MC at all

Leylin_Farlier:Nobody wants to see him forged, people want a strong determined MC who picks up cultivation fairly easily.
Leylin_Farlier
Leylin_FarlierLv13

Look at Stealing the Heavens, The Strongest Gene, Gu Daoist Master, Emperors Domination, and etc, these MCs are already strong, determined, and capable MCs. This is what most people want, an MC who did his character building in the past, thus what we see is their strength, after all, it is boring to watch some beta jap cuck MC travel throughout 200-400+ or more chapters before becoming worthy of being like ANY OTHER BASIC character in other novels. An MC can be challenged, but they shouldn't be challenged to the point of it being pathetic.

iamLint:Then there won't be a challenge to the MC at all
iamLint
iamLintLv15

True

Leylin_Farlier:Look at Stealing the Heavens, The Strongest Gene, Gu Daoist Master, Emperors Domination, and etc, these MCs are already strong, determined, and capable MCs. This is what most people want, an MC who did his character building in the past, thus what we see is their strength, after all, it is boring to watch some beta jap cuck MC travel throughout 200-400+ or more chapters before becoming worthy of being like ANY OTHER BASIC character in other novels. An MC can be challenged, but they shouldn't be challenged to the point of it being pathetic.
Darth_Gizmo
Darth_GizmoLv5

I think that it's better to build up a character through telling their story from the beginning of their journey than to tell you about it after it happened. I do think that JP novels mess this up but that has more to do with the characters' personalities. Someone that's weak doesn't have to be spineless. ATG uses a second chance at life for the MC to start over and that's one of the best web novels from China.

Suprema
SupremaLv14

>ATG >One of the best web novels from China Not to mention it's generic af, YC is a man who has penis instead of brain. At best it's 2/5.

Darth_Gizmo:I think that it's better to build up a character through telling their story from the beginning of their journey than to tell you about it after it happened. I do think that JP novels mess this up but that has more to do with the characters' personalities. Someone that's weak doesn't have to be spineless. ATG uses a second chance at life for the MC to start over and that's one of the best web novels from China.
TargetPractice1
TargetPractice1Lv6

Lol ATG might be your so called best novel in China but it definitely lacks in quality, both generic and repetitive. (Srsly up to where I've read the mcs been in like 4 tournaments and after each and every one he's presumed dead and somehow comes back right in time to save bis friends who are in a crisis every single damn time).

DragoProxy
DragoProxyLv4

Yea...i read atg till like chapter 550 or so and then i just gave up...it‘s repetetive and the MC just ***es everything under the moon up without consequenzes...i just got bored...

EtherealStar
EtherealStarLv15

Indeed

Leylin_Farlier:Look at Stealing the Heavens, The Strongest Gene, Gu Daoist Master, Emperors Domination, and etc, these MCs are already strong, determined, and capable MCs. This is what most people want, an MC who did his character building in the past, thus what we see is their strength, after all, it is boring to watch some beta jap cuck MC travel throughout 200-400+ or more chapters before becoming worthy of being like ANY OTHER BASIC character in other novels. An MC can be challenged, but they shouldn't be challenged to the point of it being pathetic.
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