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Armand_Targaryen
Armand_TargaryenLv67yr
2017-09-19 22:49

y casi apuesto que en la imagen que pusieron, el mc no sostiene una espada sino una varita mágica o un personal, así que supongo que también hay magia *-* o el se convierte en mago :O

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Ikfus
IkfusLv3

No es que se convierte en mago mrk ******mente uno de los muchos cuerpos por los que pasa es mago. supongo(?

Ikfus
IkfusLv3

Le hace censura a sim.plemente

Bi_Bineitor
Bi_BineitorLv3

¿Ustedes saben ingles? Yo tengo a mi siempre confiable compañero Google traductor a mi lado porque las novelas aqui son actualizadas a diario y en español no :'v

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