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ilsunny
ilsunnyLv67yr
2017-12-01 19:04

Written by a 3 year old. Crappy story anything goes, no planning at all. Reading this is insulting your intelligence. Worst of all is even all the plagarism from 'my beautiful ceo' and 'super soldier king' could not save this novel from all the ridiculousness of the story. 1) mc flys plane to china and takes a bus but no money for meals. 2) sniper assasin only carries 10 bullets shoots randomly and jumps out to fight melee combat due to lack of ammo. 3) divorcing dont need the cert just your id. Brainless plot hole. Critcally all females gets wet horny when looking at mc. All men becomes losers and their balls stomped literally. Seriously the author has a grudge against men balls.

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Translator
TranslatorLv5

Hahaha, I didn't make it far just first chapter and I already feel retarded by it development.

Sincool
SincoolLv14

● Mainland residents should provide the following documents and certificates while applying for divorce: a. Registered permanent residence certificate b. ID Card c. Marriage certificate (issued by marriage registration office in China mainland or China's embassy /consulate to other countries) d. Divorce agreement reached on both parties' own will e. Two two-inch photos of each other(half-length, full-face and without hat)

ilsunny
ilsunnyLv6

Lmao. You can make a new id the next day. Whats more you can print marriage certificate online. This is still a plothole the author use as a crappy excuse.

Sincool:● Mainland residents should provide the following documents and certificates while applying for divorce: a. Registered permanent residence certificate b. ID Card c. Marriage certificate (issued by marriage registration office in China mainland or China's embassy /consulate to other countries) d. Divorce agreement reached on both parties' own will e. Two two-inch photos of each other(half-length, full-face and without hat)
Sincool
SincoolLv14

Different countries, different laws and requirements. You are clearly not informed.

ilsunny
ilsunnyLv6

Thanks for heads up. But still will not rectify poor story development and lack of planning.

Sincool:Different countries, different laws and requirements. You are clearly not informed.
Dark0000
Dark0000Lv7

Yeah I agree. Especially the "wolf king" almost never kills. At most break both leg then happily go away. Like the hell dude, aren't you suppose to be the ruthless type that kills anyone who offend regardless of their background. And yet he spare them with only broken body parts. Where is the super soldier who always leave behimd mountains of corpse when he is angry!?

ilsunny
ilsunnyLv6

The author is just balantly plargarising even the fights. So its not only incoherent, its silly random shortcut to next plagarise scenario of other novels is full of plotholes and retardness. The part where mc grabs the cop girl puss.y with real stolen police pistols after collecting gang loan for company for fun infront of all policemen his coworker and underground gang employees but somehow make the girl wet and horny just to skip plot is just terrible and insulting to your intelligence.

Dark0000:Yeah I agree. Especially the "wolf king" almost never kills. At most break both leg then happily go away. Like the hell dude, aren't you suppose to be the ruthless type that kills anyone who offend regardless of their background. And yet he spare them with only broken body parts. Where is the super soldier who always leave behimd mountains of corpse when he is angry!?
Chiques
ChiquesLv10

I hate the wolf king for being playfull when he had already a wife. 😤

ilsunny:The author is just balantly plargarising even the fights. So its not only incoherent, its silly random shortcut to next plagarise scenario of other novels is full of plotholes and retardness. The part where mc grabs the cop girl puss.y with real stolen police pistols after collecting gang loan for company for fun infront of all policemen his coworker and underground gang employees but somehow make the girl wet and horny just to skip plot is just terrible and insulting to your intelligence.
Ebony
EbonyLv5

Yeah... I stopped when I got to the part where he was calling some woman who LEFT THE HOSPITAL WITHOUT SURGERY WHILE SHE HAD AN APPENDICITIS "beauty" as he points out (to her amazement) that she has an appendicitis. (This all in the first chapter.) I have read few novels this bad.

Translator:Hahaha, I didn't make it far just first chapter and I already feel retarded by it development.
Chiques
ChiquesLv10

I felt not to further read.. 😩😩

tofumofu
tofumofuLv4

Thanks for the warning lol

One99
One99Lv4

Ahhhh!!!My Balls!

bilu619
bilu619Lv5

This whay it felt like dum copy of yu chen from may beutiful CEO wife

Qunxa
QunxaLv5

Hahaha

Hisyam
HisyamLv6

Why the story need all the beutiful woman to be idiot and need to fall and ****ed by MC..Can MC more matured and not to be greedy & lustfull with all. i think, author of this story is so phatetic with no woman and 'wish dream' to have all the beuties.

Harris6262
Harris6262Lv5

Lol

XIIXAsura
XIIXAsuraLv11

True -_-

EdwinTr
EdwinTrLv11

😂😂 lol

EdwinTr
EdwinTrLv11

Men I was starting to read it but now I feel like dropping it

Blissfully
BlissfullyLv4

Looking at all of this I feel like dropping even more. I was thinking of picking it up again because last time I dropped it because he was having *** with all those other women when he had just married. But when I picked it back up I endured and read all the way to like about 500+ and WTF he got the ruyan whatever girl PREGNANT heck nah I’m dropping and never coming back.

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