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Golias
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What to talk about this series, I am currently in volume 10, well ... I do not have many criticisms related to the author's writing, only that he leaves out many dialogues and is in a hurry to continue the horror story, regarding the about what he writes, I have only one criticism, but it is very important, think of a car that goes from 0 to 100 in 4 seconds, it is ironic how many writers have little *******, but this writer is the pinnacle of *******. Now imagine a little human psychology, most people like scenes that the protagonist is badass, is not it? I like it at least, here we see one the following flow, the protagonist takes a power, okay, he does not even think much about his power, I think the author has focused too much on the plot and forgot to develop the characters, continuing .. he takes a power, he enters the movie, he fucking sucks and the situation is always, ALWAYS, danger of death eminently, then he by a miracle gets and returns to reset the story. "Oh, but the book that he unlocks his potential in the midst of danger," dear, what do you think of a protagonist who always leaves alive by luck? You think luck is what makes people want to read a story, alright, I'll write one for you. "There was once a cat that met seven dogs, fortunately he had seven lives, so he died to six dogs and guess what? The last dog died of tuberculosis " Great story, is not it? Now imagine all, ALL, the plots ending like this, perfect, do not you think? Just keep reading why it has good looks, I like to write and I think I can learn some things from it, like what is boring or not. I'm Brazilian, sorry for bad English.

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