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PaaGuuChoki
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2018-07-20 17:52

This is a very bad novel as a whole. Why? Because this is the meeting point of 2 previous novels, WDQK and BTTH, with their own cliffhanger. Instead of developing the world setting using those 2, the author developed a whole new setting instead, making the whole thing more complex. I don't mind if the author can handle it but he couldn't. Incoherency is very obvious when 2 of them begin to converge with this and the 2 MCs from those 2 novels is just like your mob character with less luck than MC even though the reintroduction was grandly described. Even more annoying is what were cliffhanged at those 2 novels aren't explained in here either, merely showing the aftermath. Therefore, I conclude this as badly executed/planned novel. It'd be a lot better if this don't have any connections to those 2 novels and could be a decent novel as a separate universe. Less hype, gimmick, and drama.

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Auras
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Agree

Maous1
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Status ch0 you must have infinite wisdom about this novel let me read more your bs

PaaGuuChoki
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Lol, I read this already in other language. Do I really need to read in english to review the completed version? You should go outside and travel, look many egos and broaden your mind

Maous1:Status ch0 you must have infinite wisdom about this novel let me read more your bs
Kevinner
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HINT: Sites other than this can also translate novels

Maous1:Status ch0 you must have infinite wisdom about this novel let me read more your bs
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xp

Haru_The_potato
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read Hitman Hitman Garden, you won't be disappointed.

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