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notsoanonymous
notsoanonymousLv57yr
2018-01-10 00:59

Over rated. Too slow of a phase with the story, too OP (ch 15 already had godly skills), low IQ MC (doesn't use his hack every time), incomplete description of levels and whatnot...

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PLEASEHELPMEH
PLEASEHELPMEHLv11

First your status which im assuming is the real status you have is at a whopping ch 0 so you didnt even read the story and just gave it a bad reveiw based off the reveiw of others and if you really did read it then your ch 15 part is completely false he doesnt even have godly abilities at ch 200 and is still mediocre compare to many people so please next time actually read before you ruin the stories credibility and rating

PLEASEHELPMEH
PLEASEHELPMEHLv11

Not only that but the plot advances very fast when compared to other stories because im on ch 600 or 700 something on other stories and the main characters in those stories are still only at the point the character in this story is at ch 200 and the low IQ part I don't even really understand because the character is actually smart and deals with every problem using either things that will help him such as the system or the most reasonalble thing to do maybe you just have too low of an IQ to understand

DaoistFatGrandma
DaoistFatGrandmaLv5

His IQ is on Chu Feng's level but slightly higher... still that's utter ****. He's dumb at the start of the novel, stop denying it.

PLEASEHELPMEH:Not only that but the plot advances very fast when compared to other stories because im on ch 600 or 700 something on other stories and the main characters in those stories are still only at the point the character in this story is at ch 200 and the low IQ part I don't even really understand because the character is actually smart and deals with every problem using either things that will help him such as the system or the most reasonalble thing to do maybe you just have too low of an IQ to understand
PLEASEHELPMEH
PLEASEHELPMEHLv11

I really dont think hes stupid at the beginning of the novel he lacks experience but he isnt stupid like this portrays

WindReader
WindReaderLv6

Your reasoning is a bit overdo it. You know almost steorotype story like this always slow phase. If you read another story that get short chapter but actually they can write with just 2 chapter or 1 chapter you will understand the meaning of true slow phase. Because this novel under category of web novel so ofcourse they usually not kinda fast. But I disagree with you about the story not mention their cultivation. They tell you but not that explicit like rookie the one who just awaken, black, silver, gold. This is they say about the level cultivation but everything still blur in the 50 chapter, usually they will get main story after 100 or so chapter.

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Comoros
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