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ChicaalteregoLv67yr
2017-08-09 13:23

I read this story after seeing it here... I didn't like it too much. The female MC is unrealistic given her background as traumatized and overconfident woman who has had lots of ex-boyfriends but almost no experience and is romantically blind. How the heck do you heap that mix on a single character and have it make sense? You can't eat and keep your cake at the same time.

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k5885Lv5

maybe you will like this novel better Mr. CEO, Spoil me 100 Percent!. this is one of my favorite novel

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ChicaalteregoLv6

I will give it a try then.

k5885:maybe you will like this novel better Mr. CEO, Spoil me 100 Percent!. this is one of my favorite novel
anna12Lv4

i totally agree. I’m at chapter 311 now and still wondering how come there is a huge rating for this. So many persona in one character, that it is unrealistic. kinda disappointed that i’ve wasted my time. anyway... better look for a new one.

ChicaalteregoLv6

Recommending “Doomed Cannon Fodder”, is not in Quidian, but is finished and most of it is real good (had 5 horrible chapters when I almost dropped it, but all in all is good)

anna12:i totally agree. I’m at chapter 311 now and still wondering how come there is a huge rating for this. So many persona in one character, that it is unrealistic. kinda disappointed that i’ve wasted my time. anyway... better look for a new one.
anna12Lv4

Thanks! will check that out.

Chicaalterego:Recommending “Doomed Cannon Fodder”, is not in Quidian, but is finished and most of it is real good (had 5 horrible chapters when I almost dropped it, but all in all is good)
classicLv5

same thought here and in addition to that, i wasn't a bit happy about how the male lead is characterized as a father. i dunno if i was the only who's thinking about this but i noticed that he's been more caring towards the girl than his son. i'm on the very first quarter of the book and been here for a few days now, it's dragging for me. the storyline is quite interesting, it's only how the characters had been characterized that makes it little less interesting.

MaryFordLv12

Haha, they're all unrealistic. TBH, I'm in love with the series because it's so trashy that it's so good whenever the face slapping begins. I do think part of the problem is the translation. The translators do their best to translate slang but it takes some knowledge of the Chinese pop culture to actually understand some things (it took me a while to get that "hugging someone's thighs" pertains to how people beg powerful people in Chinese films/dramas)

ChicaalteregoLv6

I understand. I feel just that way with Perfect Secret Love :)

MaryFord:Haha, they're all unrealistic. TBH, I'm in love with the series because it's so trashy that it's so good whenever the face slapping begins. I do think part of the problem is the translation. The translators do their best to translate slang but it takes some knowledge of the Chinese pop culture to actually understand some things (it took me a while to get that "hugging someone's thighs" pertains to how people beg powerful people in Chinese films/dramas)
nerdysnowLv6

^_^

tashaRiriLv4

Get lost! It is #1

Nur_AblayanLv3

Love d story☺☺☺☺☺

RuinednavigatorLv14

Well the female MC had only eye for one man till the day she was traumatized and she had nightmares ...she really was unable to let go of her past...this sounds reasonable to me...

shareefahLv3

It's good enough for me, if you look at the male lead personality it's only natural for him to love her more than anybody cuz he have never had sexual feelings for any girl, the only disappointing part is that the female lead did not have sexual experience with any of her x which is not fair, at least the writer should give Satan a chance....

D402CLv11

She had ex-boyfriends just to get revenge for the girls that those jerks had hurt. She is romantically blind? No, not really, it's just that she only knows how to woo a woman, not a man. It's like she had a relationship with boys for the girls. And spoiler alert, she did spend some time w/ YS. and w/ the blood of the Zhuang (not sure) family, it's probably natural that she is overconfident. and after meeting LTX, she didn't give in at first right? it took 600/700+ chapters before they got together! Afterall, she was traumatized. most chapters after that are about happenings in the entertainment circle. I do agree that it's unrealistic, but the characterization still makes sense. You need to consider the background first, after reading around 1900+ chapters, you'll get why. JUST MY OPINION. DON'T MEAN TO OFFEND ANYONE! P.S. sorry for wasting your time haha peace labyu bye!

MissrealitybitesLv14

I have finished the story and I think actually the character is very realistic, given that she has trauma. I love how LTX took time to approach her because he understands about her trauma, finally. But I'm also sad that Satan was never given a chance. He is so cute in his clueless efforts to woo her.

begummyyLv4

Can you also suggest some modern novels!?

k5885:maybe you will like this novel better Mr. CEO, Spoil me 100 Percent!. this is one of my favorite novel
Princie10Lv4

Really, many exes no experience lol

gladzrenLv4

What the crap

fantasyfemmeLv11

thank u this is v important for people ****ting on this story

D402C:She had ex-boyfriends just to get revenge for the girls that those jerks had hurt. She is romantically blind? No, not really, it's just that she only knows how to woo a woman, not a man. It's like she had a relationship with boys for the girls. And spoiler alert, she did spend some time w/ YS. and w/ the blood of the Zhuang (not sure) family, it's probably natural that she is overconfident. and after meeting LTX, she didn't give in at first right? it took 600/700+ chapters before they got together! Afterall, she was traumatized. most chapters after that are about happenings in the entertainment circle. I do agree that it's unrealistic, but the characterization still makes sense. You need to consider the background first, after reading around 1900+ chapters, you'll get why. JUST MY OPINION. DON'T MEAN TO OFFEND ANYONE! P.S. sorry for wasting your time haha peace labyu bye!
stacieBLv4

hahahaha so funny

shareefah:It's good enough for me, if you look at the male lead personality it's only natural for him to love her more than anybody cuz he have never had sexual feelings for any girl, the only disappointing part is that the female lead did not have sexual experience with any of her x which is not fair, at least the writer should give Satan a chance....
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