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Mandaline
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2020-02-03 17:26

A very poor ending to a relatively good story builtup. Only consistent activity is spraying/coughing mouthful of blood. Different ****ty looks in eyes like eyes with killing intent, cold eyes, eyes with desire to battle, eyes with aura of death and rot, ancient eyes, eyes with laughter, eyes with terror, horror, fudge... If everything was to be shown by eyes then why to talk. Author would give lot of powers to mc and then forget about them after few chapters so much so that the final battle was a bragging competition. A ****ty romance in which many unparalleled beauties are introduced but the least beautiful who has hardly spoken 10 sentences throughout the novel becomes the heroine. Author started well but then had no clue as what to write. Last book of this novel became a burden. MC is portrayed as righteous person who wipes out existence of someone only because he tried to catch a ball. Total stupid plot and basically an advertisement of authors other novels. Huge thumbs down.

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This novel started with animals spraying blood through their asses and ended with people spraying blood through mouth 🤣🤣🤣

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