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Nihirvana
NihirvanaLv137yr
2017-11-27 21:06

This is not a martial arts novel this is a slice of life romance novel about a guy who's trying to woo a girl and uses martial arts to do it.

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Wsx
WsxLv2

You won't say that again if you look at the later chapter…

Space_Fox
Space_FoxLv13

Just because there is more combat for 50 or so chapters it doesnt change anything, the core of the story is still romance not martiao arts

Wsx:You won't say that again if you look at the later chapter…
Aoalbjorn
AoalbjornLv3

MC is ugly. never gets handsome. the martial art system is too confusing

Supreme_Devil
Supreme_DevilLv4

Can you tell me the character in your name pls? For scientific proposes of course.

Space_Fox:Just because there is more combat for 50 or so chapters it doesnt change anything, the core of the story is still romance not martiao arts
Tranebrain_
Tranebrain_Lv11

U prolly a virgin

Romesh_Chowdhury
Romesh_ChowdhuryLv1

How much later is that LATER ?

Wsx:You won't say that again if you look at the later chapter…
Gang_Shit
Gang_ShitLv2

i read till 158 chap this tends more towards romance and it become boaring so I will drop here

marvie2
marvie2Lv10

thank good Imma do the same

Gang_Shit:i read till 158 chap this tends more towards romance and it become boaring so I will drop here
Other Reviews
PocketSand
PocketSandLv5

280 chapters in. This novel desperately needs an editor. Disciples become discipline, males turn into females, tenses get mixed up a lot and sentence construction is often awkward. Typos happen to everyone but seeing multiple such cases in every chapter quickly becomes annoying. Overall story development and character design is very average. MC lacks both a real goal other than "get strong" and a real rival. So although the fights aren't exactly poorly written, they feel dull to read because there is absolutely no suspense. Similarly his growth doesn't feel special as there is no risk or struggle involved. MCs master seems to exist only to act surprised at his progress. I do appreciate that his romantic interest remains relevant throughout the story, however the way its presented could use some work. Telling me what kind of emojis his girlfriend uses in her texts is just a waste of space. Not to mention she doesn't have anything going for her other than looks, which brings us to the next issue. A lot of characters seem to serve no purpose other than cheering in tournaments. They bring neither drama nor comedy, they don't give insight into the world, they don't help develop MC. Especially the female characters - typically to the genre, they exist mostly for romance. For a novel set in past, this could be explained somewhat convincingly, however for one set in modern times? Can't say much negative about world building as its basically a clone of modern world with martial artists thrown into it. However it does lack exposition in this regard - surely the inner workings and rules of society should have changed to accommodate people with supernatural abilities, yet the novel seems to barely gloss over such issues. TL;DR Overall, its not the worst novel, especially if you can ignore its weak points and glaring lack of editing. However, would I put it on my recommended list? No.

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