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Dontlookdown
DontlookdownLv117yr
2018-01-09 17:26

Its an ok story, if the goddamn girlfriend filler chapters were cut out it would be way better. Holy crap sometimes i wonder if the author is obessed with trying to make it seem like young romance. Why does half the chapter have to be texts between the mc and his girl?!?! Jesus Christ he even describes the emojis! You can just look at the chapters name and if it sounds like his girl is a part of it just skip it as nothing interesting happens. This novel is so full of nonsense its not even funny. A sadly watered down story that vividly describes emojis is my final say. Thank you for reading my rant btw👍

Martial Arts Master

Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
4.3
753 Chs

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Dontlookdown
DontlookdownLv11

Forgot to mention i read to ch. 140 and had to stop and i dont know how to edit, or even if i can so here.

7yr
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Domme
DommeLv2

What? Thats just dumb isnt it?

1yr
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XLKIR007
XLKIR007Lv4

Modern Xuanhuan? Ok I'm in... there is no need for anything else, just knowing this is enough 😤 Just click like!!! A true man looks for intriguing fights, and this Kaiser is a both a true man of the modern world and a monarch! Be a true man (even if you are a woman) and like this!!!

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Lebensohl
LebensohlLv15

A martial arts webnovel with good romance! There's like dates and cute conversations! And the female lead is so lovable. So much better than other novels where romance is just like "She is talented and has jade like skin" ignores for 100 chapter, "They get married" ignores for 500 chapters, "They go to new world" ignore for the rest of the book.

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thestatsguy
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Website : qidian china Views : 2.65 million Rating : 8.1(1185) Chapters : 760 status : completd Word count : 2.51 million author rank : platinum

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Nighterfield
NighterfieldLv5

Since many people rate this novel badly for a stupid reason (slow pace, boring). I'll give 5 stars. Come on guys you read too much op nonsense novel. If you rate a novel 1 just because it is slow, then 90% of western novels are bad This novel is written by the same author of throne of magical arcana, which is currently my favorite CN. So I have my hopes high for this novel I'll change my rating later

7yr
WildAnt
WildAntLv12

a novel from the author of the throne of magical arcana. i love that novel and i looking forward to reading this beautiful handiwork of that author. cuttlefish that loves diving is a popular author in qidian. so ill give full 5 stars for now. it can change when i read more than 50 chapter. so dont disappoint me. i am not gonna be a scumbag that rate full 1 star to a novel that i haven't read.

7yr
Nihirvana
NihirvanaLv13

This is not a martial arts novel this is a slice of life romance novel about a guy who's trying to woo a girl and uses martial arts to do it.

7yr
XLKIR007
XLKIR007Lv4

Ok, first off, let me negate all the low ratings. Secondly, I know that a lot of people have been gathering hate for this in the past few days (weeks) because of the fillers and the romance. Well let me tell you. This Is A Classic! It occured to me that the author is now aiming for this novel to have a tv series adaptation going by feel and nature of this story. As a classic CN would have that "classical" feel of love on the battlefield, a true polymerization of Action and Romance, a blend of youthful vibes and adrenaline if all kinds, a combination of.... Ak pui~ who am I kidding!? This is a Korean Drama for pete's sake! Read this novel and you'll get a girlfriend, that's all I have to say.

7yr
PocketSand
PocketSandLv5

280 chapters in. This novel desperately needs an editor. Disciples become discipline, males turn into females, tenses get mixed up a lot and sentence construction is often awkward. Typos happen to everyone but seeing multiple such cases in every chapter quickly becomes annoying. Overall story development and character design is very average. MC lacks both a real goal other than "get strong" and a real rival. So although the fights aren't exactly poorly written, they feel dull to read because there is absolutely no suspense. Similarly his growth doesn't feel special as there is no risk or struggle involved. MCs master seems to exist only to act surprised at his progress. I do appreciate that his romantic interest remains relevant throughout the story, however the way its presented could use some work. Telling me what kind of emojis his girlfriend uses in her texts is just a waste of space. Not to mention she doesn't have anything going for her other than looks, which brings us to the next issue. A lot of characters seem to serve no purpose other than cheering in tournaments. They bring neither drama nor comedy, they don't give insight into the world, they don't help develop MC. Especially the female characters - typically to the genre, they exist mostly for romance. For a novel set in past, this could be explained somewhat convincingly, however for one set in modern times? Can't say much negative about world building as its basically a clone of modern world with martial artists thrown into it. However it does lack exposition in this regard - surely the inner workings and rules of society should have changed to accommodate people with supernatural abilities, yet the novel seems to barely gloss over such issues. TL;DR Overall, its not the worst novel, especially if you can ignore its weak points and glaring lack of editing. However, would I put it on my recommended list? No.

7yr
Daoist_Tardragon
Daoist_TardragonLv12

i ll give it a full 5 stars for now. Wish there was sample chapter for these new books to see if it would catch my interest.--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

7yr
SaintBookwormLich
SaintBookwormLichLv14

I’ll keep insisting... please Webnovel, assign a translation team to end this novel ASAP, it’s a great novel go wasted, can’t stand the indifference it’s receiving from this site😭.

5yr
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