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ExpSect1stAncestor
ExpSect1stAncestorLv57yr
2017-12-05 20:22

I'v reed about 53 chapters... full of nonsense... every chapter is full of gibberish, pointles explanations and so on... Very weak story develpment, very week character design, World build hmm lets not talk bout that there is no such thing in this novel.

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Tibbles
TibblesLv15

Very week lol

Erehes
ErehesLv10

I found the story interesting

PhantomFeaRce
PhantomFeaRceLv13

Weak story development when you only read until chap 53? Idiot. That phase is still at world building

PhantomFeaRce
PhantomFeaRceLv13

Stop reviewing as you only leave readers confused

ExpSect1stAncestor
ExpSect1stAncestorLv5

I don't see what you're doing here mate. Nobody needs your opinion! If you live a **** life, that's your personal problem, no need to hate everyone because of that... 😃

PhantomFeaRce:Stop reviewing as you only leave readers confused
Kiba2107
Kiba2107Lv5

Interesante

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