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Asperion
AsperionLv137yr
2017-10-01 18:22

I liked it in the beginning but the further the story went, the more I hated the story. The character development is stupid as there is no depth to the characters in the story. The supporting characters are laughable and pathetic. It's like the author made them very stupid in order to emphasize the MC's intelligence. The MC's character is inconsistent and the timeline twists are a petty excuse for prolonging the story.

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SoloDaoist
SoloDaoistLv5

thank you bro i was feeling the same when i stopped reading it in ch35 because ...reasons (reading other novels). so the thing is what is your chapter now did you dropped it or you stoped reading it ? i thought about reading it again ,but **** it. the story Development is weird af .

Asperion
AsperionLv13

I stopped in Ch. 85. I already deleted it from my library. Not worth reading it...

aning24
aning24Lv5

its good actualy ...

antiheroo
antiherooLv4

if you are 14 years old its good ...

aning24:its good actualy ...
aning24
aning24Lv5

then dont read it if you dont like it...

antiheroo:if you are 14 years old its good ...
Key_To
Key_ToLv11

The thing is They are not literally stupid When you dig deeper in the chapters you can see that what you have read is just a small thing and it doesnt prove the story to be bad Maybe your the one whos stupid just saying if by u dont mind and i wont force you to read this back again Just dont say something about the story being bad when you ddnt read all chapters

dk09
dk09Lv5

ncan only agree the mc is acting like he is really a little boy not like a veteran assasin wow deceiving the archmage and the swordmaster but later on its only turns stupid all of the acts like only he has the brains where in fact he is mostly ignorant to most of the common stuff of this world

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