Review Detail of HLP in When A Mage Revolts

First of all, as a old lurker and a non native speaker it's actually my first review but I felt as it should be done. So, apologies in advance for any mistakes. This is actually a great book and should be regarded as a pearl. Obviously it has it's ups and downs in terms of writing, some chapters (2 or 3) are incomplete for instance, but the story development compensates for it. Especially the ending. congratulations to the author for this was probably one of the most best endings I have ever seen. The humanity of it is simply superb.